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Array ( [sid] => 7775 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Dear Lord [time] => 2002-12-01 18:00:00 [hometext] => to my loving sister that died with cancer! [bodytext] => here's a prayer
wrote for him
the LORD i am talking about
and he deserves them!

here it goes
so sweet and pretty
and it is all clean
and the words aren't dirty!

~lord~
to my lord i hope then pray
that one day you will see me
take me away from this earth
and at the gate i'll be!

i can wait all day
if that's what it will take
wait until i fall asleep
then i don't awake!

not that i don't like it here
it's just i need to see my sister
i got the way that will take me there
then she'll see my love for her!

i am sure there's better ways to show her
but this i need to do
i am not asking i am begging lord
for this is all true!

just give me one more day here
just to say goodbye
until i make my last request
and then take my life!

it's not that i don't love my family
it's just that i need her
i mean,i have went
13 years without a sister!

can you imagine how that would be
without a sister to help you
to lend a helping hand
when everyone else can't stand you?

just sit here and think for a moment
how that would be
and when you get the picture
just take my life from me!

but this will be the end
of my little prayer
just please give me what i've asked for
and just let me see her!

~britteny~ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 43 [informant] => POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Dear Lord

Contributed by POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG on Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



here's a prayer
wrote for him
the LORD i am talking about
and he deserves them!

here it goes
so sweet and pretty
and it is all clean
and the words aren't dirty!

~lord~
to my lord i hope then pray
that one day you will see me
take me away from this earth
and at the gate i'll be!

i can wait all day
if that's what it will take
wait until i fall asleep
then i don't awake!

not that i don't like it here
it's just i need to see my sister
i got the way that will take me there
then she'll see my love for her!

i am sure there's better ways to show her
but this i need to do
i am not asking i am begging lord
for this is all true!

just give me one more day here
just to say goodbye
until i make my last request
and then take my life!

it's not that i don't love my family
it's just that i need her
i mean,i have went
13 years without a sister!

can you imagine how that would be
without a sister to help you
to lend a helping hand
when everyone else can't stand you?

just sit here and think for a moment
how that would be
and when you get the picture
just take my life from me!

but this will be the end
of my little prayer
just please give me what i've asked for
and just let me see her!

~britteny~




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Re: Dear Lord (User Rating: 1 )
by Crazy4Christ on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 09:52:30 PM AEST
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Great write.......it really expresses your feelings.....im sure everyone has a point in their life when they want to just die or whatever....but, God has a greater plan....hang in there

bless
~ash~


Re: Dear Lord (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 09:06:20 AM AEST
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I am sorry that she died.




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