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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Confusions of the Teenage Lover (12/29/04)
[time] => 2004-12-29 20:27:19
[hometext] => I'm really not too sure about this one. It expresses a deep feeling I hold inside, but about the poetry, I wrote it in a haze, like most of my other work. Tell me what you think and be honest please.
[bodytext] => Sudden Temptations, Infect our realm. Values to be kept, Our strong will we keep from infect. Ensnared by the look of her eyes, Cause me to submit with no surprise. Utterly hypnotized, Hands make their way down to her thighs. We share that stare, Of 'Let's get closer.' Passion surmounts, Internal shouts, And we pull away in surprise. 'Is that me?' We share the thought. 'Can it be?' A thought not easily bought. Cuddled in her arms, I pondered of what I have done. A gaze into her eyes, And my doubts resulted to none. More kisses we made that night, Slipped into a world of utter delight. Confusion would soon surmount home in my bed. Until then we kissed in its stead. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 61 [informant] => ShadowsLuster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
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