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[aid] => mick
[title] => Living In Hell
[time] => 2004-12-28 17:53:21
[hometext] => I just wrote it on a piece of paper one day and thought to get some reviews on it.
[bodytext] => The mice scurry past the clock Not waiting for it's ring The dog whines in his sleep From the pain and relief Drip goes the paint as it drops to the carpet Rip goes the paper as it tears from your grasp Little known but oh so wise Have no faith as a priest Count to ten on one hand Count your toes as they squirm The chair squeaks and your heart races The door knocks and your heart stops An owl whoos but does not answer A gleam turns into a knife Water fills the tub Blood drains the soul Count to ten on one hand The door knocks and your heart stops Water drains the soul Blood fills the tub Good night [comments] => 1 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 48 [informant] => emodcgirl36 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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