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The reflection of strobe lights, inside your eyes
The very hue of color that seeped so deep inside
I think back, i think is it just all my fault?
I desperately remember the touch of your hand
The dirty finger nails that decored your hand
Even God himself couldn't have created this man
I think back, i think is this really all my fault?
Every day goes by and i strain to remember you
Every second of every minute burdens thoughts of you
Somehow even the furtherest lie about you becomes true
I think back, and all i remember is me remembering of you [comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 24 [informant] => LevyMetal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Disposable cameras

Contributed by LevyMetal on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:32:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I try to remember the lines in your eyes
The reflection of strobe lights, inside your eyes
The very hue of color that seeped so deep inside
I think back, i think is it just all my fault?
I desperately remember the touch of your hand
The dirty finger nails that decored your hand
Even God himself couldn't have created this man
I think back, i think is this really all my fault?
Every day goes by and i strain to remember you
Every second of every minute burdens thoughts of you
Somehow even the furtherest lie about you becomes true
I think back, and all i remember is me remembering of you

Copyright © LevyMetal ... [ 2004-12-27 20:32:44]
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Re: Disposable cameras (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:37:25 PM AEST
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That was amazing,simply amazing.

Brian

Re: Disposable cameras (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:48:24 PM AEST
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I really like this. The title intruiged me and it fits well. I am very impressed with the vivid descriptions of this person, and how you grounded the descriptions with
"i think back i think is it just all my fault". I think it gives the feeling of a flashback, as if we have stepped into your mind and see what you see and think what you think. Great job.

Re: Disposable cameras (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:42:05 AM AEST
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i like your point of view some guys are like that , they make us feel like disposible cameras, they take advantages of us, but in the end you dont know if hes worthwhile or not, be sure to read my poem and see what you think i should do, its called "everytime" great poem !~~chrissy

Re: Disposable cameras (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:48:17 AM AEST
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The title definately caught my eye and as I read the poem I realised just how well that title fits certain aspects of life. Are we not all merely disposable articles left by the side of the emotional road?

One person's trash is another person's treasure.

peace
TS

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