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Array ( [sid] => 77135 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => lost in lies [time] => 2004-12-24 14:26:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => how can i hide behind this mask
perfect
no one can see my flaws
it smiles
and inside i die
lost in lies
my body hungry for truth
we love you
NO you love the body
its inside i live
i breathe
my soul survives
my bones twist
i never was
and i never will be this mask
somehow i fooled everybody
im a fool
im lost in my lies
but i know the truth now
i found myself in my own darkness
the light shone
and my mask faded
and now you can see my tears
somehow frozen i have melted into something beautiful
the lies tortured me
now im set free
ive found myself in truth
and i shall stand
in this world
not alone anymore... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

lost in lies

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 02:26:55 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

how can i hide behind this mask
perfect
no one can see my flaws
it smiles
and inside i die
lost in lies
my body hungry for truth
we love you
NO you love the body
its inside i live
i breathe
my soul survives
my bones twist
i never was
and i never will be this mask
somehow i fooled everybody
im a fool
im lost in my lies
but i know the truth now
i found myself in my own darkness
the light shone
and my mask faded
and now you can see my tears
somehow frozen i have melted into something beautiful
the lies tortured me
now im set free
ive found myself in truth
and i shall stand
in this world
not alone anymore...

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-12-24 14:26:55]
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Re: lost in lies (User Rating: 1 )
by spider on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 02:36:42 PM AEST
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:) i loved this poem. it's really well written and I can understand fully where you're coming from.
great poem :P

Re: lost in lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 05:54:46 PM AEST
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this is a great poem!
I am kind of going through my own
self discovery right now. sorting through
all my lies.
Great write
-jen

Re: lost in lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 07:09:16 PM AEST
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its a small world...you'll run into yourself someday....good poem

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