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Xmas Eve
Contributed by
loyalist
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Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 02:56:21 AM in AEST
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I'm an idiot
I wish you would kill me
no one there
able to thrill me
I give it all
but nothing is there
what would it take
to make you to care
I've been out all night
away from your ego
I'm wondering why
you wont let me go
all I've done is change
wish that you will
instead you hide
behind the sleeping pill
I'm worn out
filled with drink
you should 've took the time
just to think
it's not all about you
on this xmas eve
I could stayed home
you've got on my nerve
I gave to give
but I find you ringless
all the words you've said
I realize are meanigless
my final cry
you'll never hear
I wish I was dead
You'll wish you were here
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loyalist
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2004-12-24 02:56:21]
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Re: Xmas Eve
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by bluebird on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 03:14:35 AM AEST
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this is a interesting write but it is great also,be proud of yourself.
~keep the faith~
Bluebird |
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Re: Xmas Eve
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 03:18:10 AM AEST
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| Yea.... xmas eve can be hard. Nice freestyle. |
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Re: Xmas Eve
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 07:26:11 PM AEST
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"my final cry
you'll never hear
I wish I was dead
You'll wish you were here"
I like that part a lot. Good poem. |
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