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Array ( [sid] => 76974 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Whisper [time] => 2004-12-23 00:17:54 [hometext] => i wrote this about my girlfriend at the time [bodytext] => Whisper into my ear what you first said to me
Those words you say with such beauty
I told you that I loved you so much
But the things that I did to you I regret with disgust
So I grab the silver blade, and press it to my skin
The blood starts dripping, as I begin to grin
I bleed for you, which becomes a power that lies inside my body
This power says that it’s good that I’ve chosen to be seen
I’m scared but unsure of how I’m to show it
I want to, but I just can’t seem to get a grip
I want to cry, I need to cry, but I just can’t
I wish someone was here that can hold my hand
I sit here wondering when my life will end
Before I die, I want to say I’m sorry to this friend
But is she really my friend
For me, is she willing to have her life end
i think not, but the truth will show up sooner or later
I haven’t seen it yet, so it must be showing up later
It isn’t fair that this is happening to me this way
I’ve been cutting myself exactly 2 years today
It hurts, but it’s what I must do to get through
To get through the days just so I can dream of you
I need you so much, but you were taken from me for the things I’ve done
So I fill up on these drugs, and load my dad’s gun
So that this life of misery can finally end
And I will be punished for the sins I’ve commited
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Whisper

Contributed by lonely_boy on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:17:54 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Whisper into my ear what you first said to me
Those words you say with such beauty
I told you that I loved you so much
But the things that I did to you I regret with disgust
So I grab the silver blade, and press it to my skin
The blood starts dripping, as I begin to grin
I bleed for you, which becomes a power that lies inside my body
This power says that it’s good that I’ve chosen to be seen
I’m scared but unsure of how I’m to show it
I want to, but I just can’t seem to get a grip
I want to cry, I need to cry, but I just can’t
I wish someone was here that can hold my hand
I sit here wondering when my life will end
Before I die, I want to say I’m sorry to this friend
But is she really my friend
For me, is she willing to have her life end
i think not, but the truth will show up sooner or later
I haven’t seen it yet, so it must be showing up later
It isn’t fair that this is happening to me this way
I’ve been cutting myself exactly 2 years today
It hurts, but it’s what I must do to get through
To get through the days just so I can dream of you
I need you so much, but you were taken from me for the things I’ve done
So I fill up on these drugs, and load my dad’s gun
So that this life of misery can finally end
And I will be punished for the sins I’ve commited




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Re: Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:50:33 AM AEST
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well i hope u dont do them things anymore,if u need someone to hold ur hand i can,well from a distance bc we probably live far appart but yeah u know what i mean,i use to wanna be outa this place for a long time and then i realized what life could be like for me,every now and then i wonder what life could be for me,if it'd be good or if itd be terrible,when i thought terrible i just wanted to grab a knife and start slicen and then i started to hope for hope and determination.i wanna live my life and give life for those who wouldnt have a life if it werent for me,life is full of hate,anger,love,laughter,happiness,determination,secrets.life can also be unbareable but u seem like a really nice and interesting person so i hope for the best for u and if i find anyone who prays everynight i'll make them pray for ya too,see how nice i am,meh anyways,great write keep up the great work

cheech


Re: Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by biggredd on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 06:04:57 PM AEST
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So this is the second of your's that I have read. And i agree with cheech. Life is full of all kinds of hardships and perils, but its filled with wonderful things, too. I am sorry that you feel that you have to punish yourself day in and day out. But I also understand why you do, too. I cut myself too...and not many people understand why we do it, but so you know i really do understand. Anyways, I like that your poems are packed with emotions and how you feel. Hopefully things will look better for you. Until then, don't lose faith.

Bigg Redd




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