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closer
Contributed by
Chizmonkies
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:16:33 PM in AEST
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i saw someone die yesterday
take their last breath
it was beautifl
why?
you may ask that if you will
seeing a soul
leave a body
feel the split second of presence
when someones sprit is in its unadultered state
it was incredible
the gaunt lines of the persons face
the lack of struggle
seeing someone slip from this life
is amazing
its actually
impossible to describe
unless you can see it
i find it strange
how people say
"woe is me
for this person has left me behind"
nah
that person didnt leave you behind
that person came that much closer
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Re: closer
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by Simmy on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 06:43:30 PM AEST
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