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sadness

Contributed by ballistik on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:02:04 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



lost confused....not knowing what ta do....werdz come in go out....everythingz screwed....no1 seemz hopeful....sealing my own doom....the imagez of torture....so completely determined ta lose....never a saint....nothing is amuzed....everythingz broken....wanna be consumed....tearz forming my life....what cant i use?....my mind becomez hazy....my heart feelz abused.....learning slowly but surely....what is there ta do?....sitting silently listening...nothing is the same....i jus wanna be through....when is this over?....nobody even knowz my thoughtz....alwayz ta blame....they want me ta be happy....they want me ta be them....no1 can teach me....everythingz in veign....why is this me....what can i say...they tell me im not helpful...they teach me im insane...demonz throwing my head back...breaking what i reign....the taunting is to much....every1z ta blame....***** all that comfert me...none of emz like me....ther over happy and fake....wanna watch em bleed...see em hurt like me....why is my thoughtz like this?....what is wrong with me....no1 wantz ta hurt me....they all jus want me ta leave...no1 can tell the truth....looking at my veinz...ther so delicate...so lovely...so untampered with....so ugly....so luscious....so untamed....so ridiculous....so healthy.... cutting... bleeding.... wanting.... breathing..... nothing....blackness....something?.....sadness......




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Re: sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:18:25 AM AEST
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again same here dont normaly like the style but again it was a good read

lots of anger this one kinda like you have felt it for a while and just now let it out




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