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within the desert

The becoming of a man
is soon at hand

Celebration is heard within the
drums echo blast

A child has come of age and is
to be given a name of ages pass

He has proven his worth

He is a mighty warrior indeed

He uses no weapons

He is a man of great strength

He brought home a buffalo
to his tribe carried upon his
back

The drums speck the truth
he is a great man

His name shall be a legend
unto it's own

Pass down through the ages
From chief to chief
His name

MAN OF GREAT POWER

For this is he

BY DENNIS LEMMEN
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GREAT POWER

Contributed by lemmen on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 10:06:05 AM in AEST
Topic: fictional

Indian drums deep beat
within the desert

The becoming of a man
is soon at hand

Celebration is heard within the
drums echo blast

A child has come of age and is
to be given a name of ages pass

He has proven his worth

He is a mighty warrior indeed

He uses no weapons

He is a man of great strength

He brought home a buffalo
to his tribe carried upon his
back

The drums speck the truth
he is a great man

His name shall be a legend
unto it's own

Pass down through the ages
From chief to chief
His name

MAN OF GREAT POWER

For this is he

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

Copyright © lemmen ... [ 2004-12-20 10:06:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: GREAT POWER (User Rating: 1 )
by girlg0newrong on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 12:16:13 PM AEST
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Different. Nice write.

Re: GREAT POWER (User Rating: 1 )
by witch_derna on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:05:02 PM AEST
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Nice. I like it alot.

Love MaDonna

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