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Array ( [sid] => 76553 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tiny Fits [time] => 2004-12-20 06:19:56 [hometext] => The never ending battle of a manic depressive... [bodytext] => I feel myself slowly slipping
away into a pit of darkness.

I am losing myself, piece by
piece as the puzzle slips away
into a misty haze that rolls in.

What is this place?

Little pills litter the floor ...
little mouths laughing at
me from below. All I can
do is fall to join them in
this maniacal laughter that
is incessantly growing louder.

Make it stop!

Yet, no one to hear these pleas,
for I am uttery alone in this
chaos. This has gone beyond
anarchy and now my mind
is signaling in smoke that there
is no hope for me.

Dizzy again, another fit, yet
a voice calls out that it is
nothing to worry about, that
I am fine.

No, I'm not fine dammit!

All I have is myself in this Hell.

26 February 2004 [comments] => 1 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 61 [informant] => TaintedSoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Tiny Fits

Contributed by TaintedSoul on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:19:56 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



I feel myself slowly slipping
away into a pit of darkness.

I am losing myself, piece by
piece as the puzzle slips away
into a misty haze that rolls in.

What is this place?

Little pills litter the floor ...
little mouths laughing at
me from below. All I can
do is fall to join them in
this maniacal laughter that
is incessantly growing louder.

Make it stop!

Yet, no one to hear these pleas,
for I am uttery alone in this
chaos. This has gone beyond
anarchy and now my mind
is signaling in smoke that there
is no hope for me.

Dizzy again, another fit, yet
a voice calls out that it is
nothing to worry about, that
I am fine.

No, I'm not fine dammit!

All I have is myself in this Hell.

26 February 2004




Copyright © TaintedSoul ... [ 2004-12-20 06:19:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Tiny Fits (User Rating: 1 )
by DragonLuvSong on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 12:43:58 PM AEST
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really great write, keep writing because it only gets better later




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