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Array ( [sid] => 76077 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Desprit Plea [time] => 2004-12-16 18:32:50 [hometext] => needed to get some stuff off my chest wrote this after words, hope it incurages others to do the same. please comment. thanks [bodytext] => My Desprit Plea

"Oh Heavinly Father please save me
for my life is worthless with out thee
help me Holy Spirit my soul is damned
you loved me before my time you planed
hear me now oh Heavinly Host
for with you my life will mean the most

as I wait for your replie
I think of when I will no longer cry
where I will prase your name Lord
with the rest of the Heavenly hord
I do cry for you pain
you went through in the end
but I rejoyce in yourt srtife
for it bought my eternal life

I will never be in despare
for I know that you care
here me now Hevenly Father
if it's not to much a bother
forgive me of my earthly sin
so with a new life I may begin."

"Hevenly Father
thanke you
amen." [comments] => 5 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 11 [informant] => wolfman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

My Desprit Plea

Contributed by wolfman on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 06:32:50 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

My Desprit Plea

"Oh Heavinly Father please save me
for my life is worthless with out thee
help me Holy Spirit my soul is damned
you loved me before my time you planed
hear me now oh Heavinly Host
for with you my life will mean the most

as I wait for your replie
I think of when I will no longer cry
where I will prase your name Lord
with the rest of the Heavenly hord
I do cry for you pain
you went through in the end
but I rejoyce in yourt srtife
for it bought my eternal life

I will never be in despare
for I know that you care
here me now Hevenly Father
if it's not to much a bother
forgive me of my earthly sin
so with a new life I may begin."

"Hevenly Father
thanke you
amen."

Copyright © wolfman ... [ 2004-12-16 18:32:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Desprit Plea (User Rating: 1 )
by shattered_heart on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:56:11 PM AEST
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A prayer like this could do me some good. Thanx.

- Rachelle

Re: My Desprit Plea (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:52:43 PM AEST
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New favorite! Josh, this is tremendous. Most definitely from your deepest heart. A very, very, honest prayer.
Take care.
David

Re: My Desprit Plea (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:40:38 PM AEST
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Bravo, bravo! My new favorite as well.

A deep, moving piece. Humbling oneself to the Light - it's ever needed and ever rewarding.

Excellent work.

Andrew

Re: My Desprit Plea (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:57:29 AM AEST
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wonderful salvation prayer.
use a spell check.

Re: My Desprit Plea (User Rating: 1 )
by NightOwl on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:53:06 PM AEST
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Awesome job! It's really personal, and it is something I think everyone should read...
I do cry for you pain
you went through in the end
but I rejoyce in yourt srtife
for it bought my eternal life
It really speaks volumes of your faith, and I think that's amazing...
Excellently done!

*~Erin~*

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