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Array ( [sid] => 75951 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => YOU WANT DARK YOU GOT IT [time] => 2004-12-15 20:48:05 [hometext] => BE AFRAID LOCK YOUR WINDOWS LOCK YOUR DOOR FOR SOON DEATH SHALL KNOCK UPON YOUR SOUL..........YOU WANTED DARK YOU GOT DARK TO BE COUNTIUNE LET'S SEE HOW DARK WE CAN GO [bodytext] => A challenge was given to me
to write what's the darkest
within me.

Well, let's see what I can do
to suite you.

My darkest, My deepest secrets,
I hide within my soul.

How dark are you willing to go?

Bloodfull lust of sex,
cannibalism.

I'll go deeper than that.

A hatred of all life not just
a hate a devils hate.
The darkest of all man's sin's.

ARE YOU AFRAID.

I'M NOT ANYMORE.

My mind is ravaged with
pains of the past.
I wish to inflect on others.
Dreams of the darkest kind.

Dreams of rape.
Dreams of dead sex.

How deep do you want to go.

Let's go deeper,
Let's see what we see.
Are you afraid of what you see.
Of what I write,
With passion and desire

Hell has not seen the likes
of me.
I am the darkest of all man's
sins.
GOD has his own special hell
for me.

You wanted dark?
You got the darkest of all
men's souls.

I am but a child who's rape
scared my soul.

And now my darkest desire.

No maybe later.

Be afraid Be very afraid.

I MAY BE COMING FOR YOU.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

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YOU WANT DARK YOU GOT IT

Contributed by lemmen on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:48:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A challenge was given to me
to write what's the darkest
within me.

Well, let's see what I can do
to suite you.

My darkest, My deepest secrets,
I hide within my soul.

How dark are you willing to go?

Bloodfull lust of sex,
cannibalism.

I'll go deeper than that.

A hatred of all life not just
a hate a devils hate.
The darkest of all man's sin's.

ARE YOU AFRAID.

I'M NOT ANYMORE.

My mind is ravaged with
pains of the past.
I wish to inflect on others.
Dreams of the darkest kind.

Dreams of rape.
Dreams of dead sex.

How deep do you want to go.

Let's go deeper,
Let's see what we see.
Are you afraid of what you see.
Of what I write,
With passion and desire

Hell has not seen the likes
of me.
I am the darkest of all man's
sins.
GOD has his own special hell
for me.

You wanted dark?
You got the darkest of all
men's souls.

I am but a child who's rape
scared my soul.

And now my darkest desire.

No maybe later.

Be afraid Be very afraid.

I MAY BE COMING FOR YOU.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

Copyright © lemmen ... [ 2004-12-15 20:48:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: YOU WANT DARK YOU GOT IT (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:57:01 PM AEST
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Sadly, I expected more. It kept my attention adn over all it was good, by you really hyped it up with your intro.

Re: YOU WANT DARK YOU GOT IT (User Rating: 1 )
by athena on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:57:13 PM AEST
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:: EYES GET REALLY REALLLY BIG::
...dang thats...dang
*a very shaken athena

Re: YOU WANT DARK YOU GOT IT (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:05:47 PM AEST
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geeze man good write but im not afraid so come on dont play n tease just bring it

Re: YOU WANT DARK YOU GOT IT (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:46:15 PM AEST
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The seque was great Dennis, but there was no meat to it after that. Try again, I know you can do this better.

Smiles,
Rita

Re: YOU WANT DARK YOU GOT IT (User Rating: 1 )
by witch_derna on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:05:50 PM AEST
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Hmm not sure what to say for this one. How about writing me a love poem lol.

Re: YOU WANT DARK YOU GOT IT (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:48:28 AM AEST
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BRAVO. EXCELLENT. Dennis that was brillant. So dark and beautifully written! loved this very much!!

~ :: christina :: ~

Re: YOU WANT DARK YOU GOT IT (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:42:21 AM AEST
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Very dark, very deep,
could have gone a little deeper, but that's your own choice.
Very good,
I really enjoyed reading this one.
MUAH
*~givingin~*

Re: YOU WANT DARK YOU GOT IT (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:16:41 PM AEST
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great write...

hope to c more from u soon

Jishes

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