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Array ( [sid] => 75942 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The end to our start [time] => 2004-12-15 19:28:05 [hometext] => This one was written fairly quickly but, says everything that I wanted to say at that moment [bodytext] => I'm sorry that I couldn't stop staring when I saw you
today, I should have pretended not to notice you and
turned the other way. I saw that look in your eyes
you once only had for me, why was that always
something which I refused to see? We talked for a bit
and then walked away, why couldn't we have just
stopped time then forever in the moment is where we
would stay? I don't know why it's been so difficult
for me to admit, that in pushing you away heartache is
all I am going to get. I feel it's far to late to say
it now, and if you were standing in front of me I
wouldn't know how. I love you hun, with all of my
heart, I guess finally admitting it is where we will
end before we start.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jadedtrust [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The end to our start

Contributed by jadedtrust on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:28:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I'm sorry that I couldn't stop staring when I saw you
today, I should have pretended not to notice you and
turned the other way. I saw that look in your eyes
you once only had for me, why was that always
something which I refused to see? We talked for a bit
and then walked away, why couldn't we have just
stopped time then forever in the moment is where we
would stay? I don't know why it's been so difficult
for me to admit, that in pushing you away heartache is
all I am going to get. I feel it's far to late to say
it now, and if you were standing in front of me I
wouldn't know how. I love you hun, with all of my
heart, I guess finally admitting it is where we will
end before we start.

Copyright © jadedtrust ... [ 2004-12-15 19:28:05]
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Re: The end to our start (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:02:21 PM AEST
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Amazin amazing lil poem....very nicely written...let him/her know...

xxUmangxx

Re: The end to our start (User Rating: 1 )
by Jester on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 05:12:33 AM AEST
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tattered reminants that hold true in nearly everyones mind, that was beautifully captured within your words.

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