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Array ( [sid] => 75851 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Winter [time] => 2004-12-15 06:04:53 [hometext] => to entertain you [bodytext] => Its winter where I sit
hands so cold as I lift
hot liquid to drink, in thought.
Dreariness of the day
the sharp feeling of the wind
as it finds a way through
a small crack of the door
intensifies the bitter chill.
I look for brighter days
this isn`t helping
just seems to add to the burden.
if I had someone, it wouldn`t
be the just the months ahead,
it wouldn`t be trying to get warm.
I wouldn`t try to tuck myself
deeper into the blankets
deeper inside me.
snows will come and I think I`ll parish
it will cover everything, and let it rest,
I move to the window and the glass
is frosted over, like my heart I think
and scratch a small spot to peek out!

God`s country
and its so cold here.....

No...

Here in my heart...
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Winter

Contributed by Crow on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:04:53 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Its winter where I sit
hands so cold as I lift
hot liquid to drink, in thought.
Dreariness of the day
the sharp feeling of the wind
as it finds a way through
a small crack of the door
intensifies the bitter chill.
I look for brighter days
this isn`t helping
just seems to add to the burden.
if I had someone, it wouldn`t
be the just the months ahead,
it wouldn`t be trying to get warm.
I wouldn`t try to tuck myself
deeper into the blankets
deeper inside me.
snows will come and I think I`ll parish
it will cover everything, and let it rest,
I move to the window and the glass
is frosted over, like my heart I think
and scratch a small spot to peek out!

God`s country
and its so cold here.....

No...

Here in my heart...

Copyright © Crow ... [ 2004-12-15 06:04:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:15:38 PM AEST
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A very moving write...........I understand it now.
I hope you arent offended by me leaving a comment.

Good luck
Larry

Re: Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:34:38 PM AEST
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not at all, you know what i`m talking about I`m sure. thanks for taking the time to read me. peace my friend, Crow

Re: Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by wray on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 04:33:11 AM AEST
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Mm very entertaining. I thought this was really sweet actually, the connection between winter and your lonely heart. Good luck on defrosting!

Re: Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 01:36:46 AM AEST
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can't believe I missed this write...very well written tugs at the heart my friend

Shari

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