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Array ( [sid] => 75840 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => only friend [time] => 2004-12-15 00:33:15 [hometext] => this is a short poem, but it means a lot to me [bodytext] => with a blade in my hand, and blood on the floor
i'm unable to feel this pain anymore
my only friend is the blade that makes me numb
this feeling i never got from the people i love
these tears fall to the floor, in which my blood poors
though i lay dying, i cut myself some more
no regret for cutting myself again
seeing the blood makes me glad that i've sinned
i don't care if i die by my own hand
taking my own life would make me feel more like a man
though scared of the outcome of when i die
i cut the vain in half as i hysterically cry
i play the songs that remind me of when i smiled
i haven't felt this good in a real long while [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 36 [informant] => lonely_boy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

only friend

Contributed by lonely_boy on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 12:33:15 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

with a blade in my hand, and blood on the floor
i'm unable to feel this pain anymore
my only friend is the blade that makes me numb
this feeling i never got from the people i love
these tears fall to the floor, in which my blood poors
though i lay dying, i cut myself some more
no regret for cutting myself again
seeing the blood makes me glad that i've sinned
i don't care if i die by my own hand
taking my own life would make me feel more like a man
though scared of the outcome of when i die
i cut the vain in half as i hysterically cry
i play the songs that remind me of when i smiled
i haven't felt this good in a real long while

Copyright © lonely_boy ... [ 2004-12-15 00:33:15]
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Re: only friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Amanda_Interrupted on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 12:50:56 AM AEST
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Wow.. good poem... I have felt the same way with my blade too..

Re: only friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire_Blue on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 03:48:45 AM AEST
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visually intense, written with feeling...and in tears of agony....

Re: only friend (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:01:51 AM AEST
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great write......i hope u dont carry through with this...i have felt this way and thought the knife was my only friend too. please take care. good job again
punka rach
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