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This wonderful messed up life
I wish I could just go to sleep at times
When I'm holding a carving knife
That's when I feel happy sometimes.

Cutting marks to see within
To see if I'm even alive
I watch the blood flow begin
It's then that I take five.

Do I go deep or do I stop?
Maybe just enough to feel release
Just so I can still cover with my top
Maybe one day I'll know true peace.
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The Cutter Within

Contributed by witch_derna on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:36:57 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

This wonderful messed up life
I wish I could just go to sleep at times
When I'm holding a carving knife
That's when I feel happy sometimes.

Cutting marks to see within
To see if I'm even alive
I watch the blood flow begin
It's then that I take five.

Do I go deep or do I stop?
Maybe just enough to feel release
Just so I can still cover with my top
Maybe one day I'll know true peace.

Copyright © witch_derna ... [ 2004-12-14 06:36:57]
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Re: The Cutter Within (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:38:06 AM AEST
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I hope that you know true peace soon *hugs* this was a very pained and dark write
pixie xx

Re: The Cutter Within (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:25:46 AM AEST
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That day has come for me you have showed me what true love can be.
You helped me to see that there is a life other than cutting my flesh away.
And someday together we will over come it comepletely.

~LOVE DENNIS~

Re: The Cutter Within (User Rating: 1 )
by musicisluv7 on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:29:34 AM AEST
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i hope that u find true peace very soon.
i can't say i hav completely but i havent
cut myself for a while. this was a beautiful,
painful write. kip on rytin!
much luv *hugs*

Re: The Cutter Within (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:46:46 AM AEST
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very emotional, sad write,
hope you have better days to come.
MUAh
taske care

*~givingin~*

Re: The Cutter Within (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 02:59:29 PM AEST
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i hope that you can find peace as well....as i am at this point somewhat as well....i know its tough...but im sure u can make it....great write...u have a talent.....excellent job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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