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[sid] => 75669
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[aid] => mick
[title] => all im left with
[time] => 2004-12-13 21:55:36
[hometext] => please read and give me feedback...thanks guys.....an extremely personal write
[bodytext] => You were like the sun Shining bright in my darkened days Admiring my face made me feel special In so many ways But I found out you love her It was like a knife in the heart Why didn’t you want me? Why did we part? I look upon you every day Holding her hand and not mine You can’t imagine how it feels To lie to yourself that everything’s fine Are you this arrogant as to what you put me through? To my intense hurt and why I look so blue? Numb from the heartache I feel asleep although awake Your fake smiles are completely useless They no longer work on me You want them to charm my heart But I see right through them can’t you see? It kills me to look at you So ill keep walking straight ahead I’m not gonna stop and say hi My forlorn emotions cannot be said You discovered something about me Now wanting nothing because of this It doesn’t change who I am How could you give up these moments of bliss? I feel the shame of a truth that’s mine helpless and confused and forever tainted by your lips My body you abused What you did was hurtful and unfair Dismissing me as a nobody Feelings of worthlessness i now have to bear Numb from the heartache I feel asleep although awake Soon to be gone Your presence will be lost Will you grace me with a goodbye? Despite the wrong and cost? Will you be happy far away from here? Will you forget me or close to your heart keep me near? There’s an emptiness inside of me I cannot seem to fill To just hang on To just survive Takes all my strength and will Now you’re leaving It’s easy to say goodbye With so many things kept unsaid I need to break down and cry Out of my life and out of my sight You’re taking my heart with you and there is nothing I shall gain Now all I’m left with is my own anguish and pain My will begins to weaken My hope and strength begins to fade Suddenly my mind seems clear as I reach for the blade… [comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 32 [informant] => pUnKa_RaCh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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