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It is very late at night
people are quiet
my heart is only for you keeping
waiting for your coming back
hold the breath
only the lovely book of the bowing case

close stereo
by let heartbeat stay only
attentively to sound of one's walking of you and listen
it is my quiet most absorbed thought while waiting

I pride of you
the proud of me is you
become only for each other this life
it is crossed every merry eve in the life
altogether that side by side

Waiting for your kissing
wait for your embracing
given to you Tenderness
the body of what has been given
my ruddy face you can see
you can hear my rapid heartbeat .

...... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

waiting for husband

Contributed by holy on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:15:26 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

It is very late at night

It is very late at night
people are quiet
my heart is only for you keeping
waiting for your coming back
hold the breath
only the lovely book of the bowing case

close stereo
by let heartbeat stay only
attentively to sound of one's walking of you and listen
it is my quiet most absorbed thought while waiting

I pride of you
the proud of me is you
become only for each other this life
it is crossed every merry eve in the life
altogether that side by side

Waiting for your kissing
wait for your embracing
given to you Tenderness
the body of what has been given
my ruddy face you can see
you can hear my rapid heartbeat .

......

Copyright © holy ... [ 2004-12-13 09:15:26]
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Re: waiting for husband (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:20:00 AM AEST
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I love that feeling of knowing that they'll be home any minute *smiles* a lovely write, really well written,

pixie xx

Re: waiting for husband (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:22:32 AM AEST
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hi,good night ,pixie ,what are you doing?the time is 23:33 here now ,what time there ?happy with you accompany too ,haha,thanks again

Re: waiting for husband (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 04:14:02 PM AEST
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The thrill of anticipation and love....wonderful.

Re: waiting for husband (User Rating: 1 )
by Jezabel on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:52:37 AM AEST
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soft & tender. luv

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