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Array ( [sid] => 75502 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I really hate this guy... [time] => 2004-12-12 20:52:30 [hometext] => Nothing much to say, hope you like it... [bodytext] => I'm staring in your face and all I feel is disgust,
All you got in your life is greed, want, need and lust,
By these you are controlled, to them you are a slave,
They make you, take you all the way to your grave,
You're a nasty little creature and not a feature is pleasant,
You live in daydreams when you need to live in the present,
You want to be needed, but you need to realize,
No one gets comfort by looking in your eyes,
You're unneeded, unwanted, alone you stand,
Another flesh sack on the planet, another grain in the sand,
So now I'm staring at you, straight into your face,
See you're a disgrace to the whole human race,
Angered at you, I swing with my fist,
Now get ready, cause here comes the twist,
My hand is scratched and cut and needs mending fast,
Blood bleeds on the scratches of these scars from the past,
Now there's eight of you in the reflective glass,
Another day gone by, another emotion to pass,
Another seven years of bad luck draws nearer,
As I slowly walk away from the broken bathroom mirror... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Unheard_Mute [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
I really hate this guy...

Contributed by Unheard_Mute on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:52:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I'm staring in your face and all I feel is disgust,
All you got in your life is greed, want, need and lust,
By these you are controlled, to them you are a slave,
They make you, take you all the way to your grave,
You're a nasty little creature and not a feature is pleasant,
You live in daydreams when you need to live in the present,
You want to be needed, but you need to realize,
No one gets comfort by looking in your eyes,
You're unneeded, unwanted, alone you stand,
Another flesh sack on the planet, another grain in the sand,
So now I'm staring at you, straight into your face,
See you're a disgrace to the whole human race,
Angered at you, I swing with my fist,
Now get ready, cause here comes the twist,
My hand is scratched and cut and needs mending fast,
Blood bleeds on the scratches of these scars from the past,
Now there's eight of you in the reflective glass,
Another day gone by, another emotion to pass,
Another seven years of bad luck draws nearer,
As I slowly walk away from the broken bathroom mirror...




Copyright © Unheard_Mute ... [ 2004-12-12 20:52:30]
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Re: I really hate this guy... (User Rating: 1 )
by katiemae06 on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 09:00:20 PM AEST
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i really loved your poem and the twist in the middle totally suprised me..it was great


Re: I really hate this guy... (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 09:02:37 PM AEST
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This is intense...internal struggle...it's a lovely thing isn't it. Is this what you really feel? What would make you feel this way...write this. If this is how you feel, i need to tell you that i disagree. Your friends need you...if you need, i'm here. Come talk to me. -Sami-


Re: I really hate this guy... (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:52:21 AM AEST
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wow what a awesome and yet strange twisted write.. I m loving it!! excellent job!!

peace and hope
JENNI


Re: I really hate this guy... (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:17:27 PM AEST
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Haha. I am going to leave yet another message. Your probably getting sick of my million comments but yet again...I love this so much. (yes i know...you knew that) haha the twist at the end totally caught me off guard. I had to read it agian to make sure i read it right. its amazing. WOW
Lauren


Re: I really hate this guy... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:46:08 PM AEST
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maybe im crazy and because i dont know you all that well, but i dont think you should or have any reason to hate yourself. ::would understand if you put me in a straight jacket::




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