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[title] => Perhaps A Straightjacket Wouldn't Be So Bad After All
[time] => 2004-12-11 00:22:06
[hometext] => I consider losing my mind an event.
[bodytext] => Thinking to myself that life is driving me crazy.
Another part of me responded,
How can it drive you anywhere?!?!?
This is a problem in two fashions.
One, I was talking to myself,
Two, I responded and decided to write about losing my mind.
Perhaps this other faction is friendly I start to ponder,
Maybe I should take him a jello mold.
Or what if it's a girl,
Flowers, candy???
Hmm.......Well I could just go find out I suppose,
Formal introductions are, after all, unisexual, right?
Well I can't drive there it would be to crazy!!!
So I decided to walk,
It was the shortest walk ever.
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Perhaps A Straightjacket Wouldn't Be So Bad After All
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:22:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Event
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Thinking to myself that life is driving me crazy.
Another part of me responded,
How can it drive you anywhere?!?!?
This is a problem in two fashions.
One, I was talking to myself,
Two, I responded and decided to write about losing my mind.
Perhaps this other faction is friendly I start to ponder,
Maybe I should take him a jello mold.
Or what if it's a girl,
Flowers, candy???
Hmm.......Well I could just go find out I suppose,
Formal introductions are, after all, unisexual, right?
Well I can't drive there it would be to crazy!!!
So I decided to walk,
It was the shortest walk ever.
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
... [
2004-12-11 00:22:06]
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Re: Perhaps A Straightjacket Wouldn't Be So Bad After All
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 01:09:31 AM AEST
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I wrote this so there are three of you..hehehehe..it sounds just like me.. and if you're in a strait jacket..you can't write unless you use your toes.. think about that..
and think about the use of the words to too and two.. |
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Re: Perhaps A Straightjacket Wouldn't Be So Bad After All
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by Rxqueen on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 01:20:27 AM AEST
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| This was definately the kind of work I love to read. It was very hot. Sometimes I feel like I am going out of my mind... People swear I have split personalities... I think it just adds to my character. Why have one when you can have two? I loved this. It was very entertaining. You write very well, and I am not just saying that because you gave me comments. You are extremely talented. I enjoy your poems. |
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Re: Perhaps A Straightjacket Wouldn't Be So Bad After All
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:12:30 AM AEST
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haha awesome, i love it.
so true |
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Re: Perhaps A Straightjacket Wouldn't Be So Bad After All
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by DesperateSoul on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:40:44 AM AEST
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Off the Freakin HOOK!!!!! Been there and had days just like that!! Thankz for sharing a piece of your insanity with me!!! Keep writing and keep posting always!! D.$.
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Re: Perhaps A Straightjacket Wouldn't Be So Bad After All
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by pixie on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:56:32 AM AEST
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that was really good, loved it!!
pixie xx |
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Re: Perhaps A Straightjacket Wouldn't Be So Bad After All
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by Infinite_Sadness on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:40:07 AM AEST
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Let me know when you find it...
Enjoyed reading that |
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Re: Perhaps A Straightjacket Wouldn't Be So Bad After All
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:18:21 PM AEST
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Write on, my brother!
--The ... Moth |
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Re: Perhaps A Straightjacket Wouldn't Be So Bad After All
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:41:04 AM AEST
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Ohh this has to be the strangest thing i have ever read in my life, its so good and different from what im used to. its like finding a new treasure. Nicely done
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Perhaps A Straightjacket Wouldn't Be So Bad After All
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 02:47:17 PM AEST
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Once again Dane ... the best job of the worst situations just shine through your pen and mind . That was fabulous. A short trip indeed.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Perhaps A Straightjacket Wouldn't Be So Bad After All
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 25th October 2014 @ 10:50:10 PM AEST
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Was it worth the trip? :)
~Scorp |
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