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Array ( [sid] => 75110 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Midnight Walk [time] => 2004-12-09 21:18:34 [hometext] => I was feeling a little depressed during a study hall, while reading an Anne Rice book. So I wrote this poem. Enjoy! [bodytext] => The rain pours upon my head
As I walk down this dark place.
Evanescent thoughts in my mind
You’ll find no smile upon my face.

The little drops do not hide my sorrow
Or the evidence of my fears
I’ve been told to destroy
But I haven’t all these years.

My world seemed to suddenly crash
At the end of that hall,
Down and down the hard stone steps
Where he took his mighty fall.

I lost my way,
After he died
I didn’t care for life
I broke down and cried.

Just when I thought I was a lost hope
Almost like a little lost child.
He then found me
This man that was bewitching and somewhat wild

He tricked my into this life
With his sweet kiss.
This magic world turned malevolent
I cannot live in this vague bliss.

He said this would be a perfect life
For we would never grow old.
I should of thought of what I’d miss
But instead my soul I sold.

I do not like to live like this
The lives that I destroy
But to him, he doesn’t even think of it
With them he only toys.

To him, they’re only specs of life
Their emotions to be shaken
Until he binds down upon them
Their world now completely broken.

He tries to guide me towards them
But there in a chair I sat
I sincerely despise him
That blond haired prince of brats.

I had to get away from him
Get away from this lie
I walked until I heard the sound
Of a girl that was rather shy.

She asked me to stay with her
Her voice, like the coo of a dove
And as I held her in my arms
I felt a mixture of sorrow and love.

She was so small and so fragile,
Her head against my chest
Then my hunger took her soul
And I thought that I had put her to rest.

As I laid her on the ground
He found me just to taunt me
I ran swiftly past his shadow
He only wanted to haunt me

As I ran, I lost my thoughts
As I traveled through the night
My thoughts disappeared from my head
And they went off on a swift flight.

His words finally made sense to me
After I pretended to be blind
The truth towards my own happiness
The answer I alone had to find.

I finally fell to my knees
Upon the dark road I sat
No one there to keep my company
Except for low life rats.

Eons later, later that night
He found me sitting there
He asked me to come with him
And a surprise that I was completely unaware.

We traveled, just him and I
Until we reached our house
And then I heard a sound
Almost as quiet as a mouse

I opened the door
To see the little girl sound asleep
I felt guilt go throughout me
While she was merely counting sheep.

‘ I thought I killed her,’ I confessed
I felt my eyes from tears
‘ Your conscience is cleared,’ he told me
As he did what I most feared.

He bent down upon her,
Giving her his sweet kiss
I felt a tear roll down my face
As I thought of the life she was going to miss.

But I grew quite fond of her
This precious little girl
When I thought my world was gray
She took it for a whirl.

She never stopped asking me
About our world and our kind
And I said to her simply
Your own answers you must find

However, she started to reject him
Our great and wonderful sire
Yet I was the one who helped him to his grave
Causing him death by fire.

She and I left after he was gone
The flames consumed him fast
I was once again crying for a loved one
She said my tears wouldn’t last.

As we stood, the two of us
Our thoughts we sought to send
To anyone who was listening
And hoping that this wasn’t the end.

We searched for others like us
Ones that shared our fate
But when we discovered their secret coven
I found they were not in heaven’s gate.

They told me it was a crime
To bring a young one, like she, in
They saw her as a monster
As if she was a forbidden sin

Years later after that I lost her
My little one, the one with whom I use to talk
But now I can only remember her
As I take my midnight walks.
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Midnight Walk

Contributed by night_goddess666 on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 09:18:34 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The rain pours upon my head
As I walk down this dark place.
Evanescent thoughts in my mind
You’ll find no smile upon my face.

The little drops do not hide my sorrow
Or the evidence of my fears
I’ve been told to destroy
But I haven’t all these years.

My world seemed to suddenly crash
At the end of that hall,
Down and down the hard stone steps
Where he took his mighty fall.

I lost my way,
After he died
I didn’t care for life
I broke down and cried.

Just when I thought I was a lost hope
Almost like a little lost child.
He then found me
This man that was bewitching and somewhat wild

He tricked my into this life
With his sweet kiss.
This magic world turned malevolent
I cannot live in this vague bliss.

He said this would be a perfect life
For we would never grow old.
I should of thought of what I’d miss
But instead my soul I sold.

I do not like to live like this
The lives that I destroy
But to him, he doesn’t even think of it
With them he only toys.

To him, they’re only specs of life
Their emotions to be shaken
Until he binds down upon them
Their world now completely broken.

He tries to guide me towards them
But there in a chair I sat
I sincerely despise him
That blond haired prince of brats.

I had to get away from him
Get away from this lie
I walked until I heard the sound
Of a girl that was rather shy.

She asked me to stay with her
Her voice, like the coo of a dove
And as I held her in my arms
I felt a mixture of sorrow and love.

She was so small and so fragile,
Her head against my chest
Then my hunger took her soul
And I thought that I had put her to rest.

As I laid her on the ground
He found me just to taunt me
I ran swiftly past his shadow
He only wanted to haunt me

As I ran, I lost my thoughts
As I traveled through the night
My thoughts disappeared from my head
And they went off on a swift flight.

His words finally made sense to me
After I pretended to be blind
The truth towards my own happiness
The answer I alone had to find.

I finally fell to my knees
Upon the dark road I sat
No one there to keep my company
Except for low life rats.

Eons later, later that night
He found me sitting there
He asked me to come with him
And a surprise that I was completely unaware.

We traveled, just him and I
Until we reached our house
And then I heard a sound
Almost as quiet as a mouse

I opened the door
To see the little girl sound asleep
I felt guilt go throughout me
While she was merely counting sheep.

‘ I thought I killed her,’ I confessed
I felt my eyes from tears
‘ Your conscience is cleared,’ he told me
As he did what I most feared.

He bent down upon her,
Giving her his sweet kiss
I felt a tear roll down my face
As I thought of the life she was going to miss.

But I grew quite fond of her
This precious little girl
When I thought my world was gray
She took it for a whirl.

She never stopped asking me
About our world and our kind
And I said to her simply
Your own answers you must find

However, she started to reject him
Our great and wonderful sire
Yet I was the one who helped him to his grave
Causing him death by fire.

She and I left after he was gone
The flames consumed him fast
I was once again crying for a loved one
She said my tears wouldn’t last.

As we stood, the two of us
Our thoughts we sought to send
To anyone who was listening
And hoping that this wasn’t the end.

We searched for others like us
Ones that shared our fate
But when we discovered their secret coven
I found they were not in heaven’s gate.

They told me it was a crime
To bring a young one, like she, in
They saw her as a monster
As if she was a forbidden sin

Years later after that I lost her
My little one, the one with whom I use to talk
But now I can only remember her
As I take my midnight walks.




Copyright © night_goddess666 ... [ 2004-12-09 21:18:34]
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Re: Midnight Walk (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 09:42:00 PM AEST
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very long and storylike. you must have had a lot of time in study hall to do this.


Re: Midnight Walk (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:08:59 AM AEST
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A beautifully written story, so vivid an image painted before my eyes, so intense to read, and very gripping to behold...an excellent marvel to behold...composed well...I liked this write very much and enjoyed reading it.




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