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Array ( [sid] => 74981 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Girl In The Stars [time] => 2004-12-09 00:08:35 [hometext] => Don't really feel like writing today but just want to post something I guess you can tell that I did not feel like writing it when you read it comments are always welcome [bodytext] => I can see you there dancing in the clarity of the night

As your grace mingles with the moons frail light

Frail because it leaves the moon to be with you

Making you glow as it sets into

The clouds that cover the stars in the nighttime sky

Making you the most beautiful site

The stars shed their grace on you covering you with star dust

The night forms with you a powerful bond of trust

Wanting to be one with you so that all can see

Loving you and all of your beauty

So the stars begin to fall and come to you to take you away

To take you to a better and more deserving place

One where people would love you as much as I do in every way

One where you will be made to feel the way you should every day

Wanted, loved, admired and worshiped by all those who are in your grace

But that would not be nothing too new I have always seen the true beauty of your face

It’s in your eyes where I see what means most to me in my life

It’s your soul that shines brightly warming mine freeing me from all the strife

This is why the stars want you as one of them in the nighttime sky

So all who see you love you and feel the same comforts from you as I

There is really no better place for you for my darling

I will hurt to see you go but it will just be a small scarling

Because I will be able to see you when the sun has fully set

This is why giving you to the sky leaves me with no regrets
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A Girl In The Stars

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 12:08:35 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty



I can see you there dancing in the clarity of the night

As your grace mingles with the moons frail light

Frail because it leaves the moon to be with you

Making you glow as it sets into

The clouds that cover the stars in the nighttime sky

Making you the most beautiful site

The stars shed their grace on you covering you with star dust

The night forms with you a powerful bond of trust

Wanting to be one with you so that all can see

Loving you and all of your beauty

So the stars begin to fall and come to you to take you away

To take you to a better and more deserving place

One where people would love you as much as I do in every way

One where you will be made to feel the way you should every day

Wanted, loved, admired and worshiped by all those who are in your grace

But that would not be nothing too new I have always seen the true beauty of your face

It’s in your eyes where I see what means most to me in my life

It’s your soul that shines brightly warming mine freeing me from all the strife

This is why the stars want you as one of them in the nighttime sky

So all who see you love you and feel the same comforts from you as I

There is really no better place for you for my darling

I will hurt to see you go but it will just be a small scarling

Because I will be able to see you when the sun has fully set

This is why giving you to the sky leaves me with no regrets




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Re: A Girl In The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 12:29:08 AM AEST
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U r so modest. U write a masterpeice and then say u wasn't in the mood to write.
Grear job as always.
luv, huggs, smiles, stars,
emy


Re: A Girl In The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:58:34 AM AEST
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This is excellent you always put ur best writes down.
Its just an amazing feeling that i get from this poem.

Love
Stace xx


Re: A Girl In The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:33:12 PM AEST
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i agree with emy.


Re: A Girl In The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 05:03:04 PM AEST
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WOW!
I am amazed. And this is a not in the mood to write poet? My goodness. This was perfect. *S* Cynthia




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