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[sid] => 74902
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Did You Know?
[time] => 2004-12-08 15:07:28
[hometext] => This isn't actually about me or anyone I know and it's in the point of view of three people... bit different from what i normally write -please comment
[bodytext] => Did you know you hurt her,
When all you did was lie?
Did you know it broke her,
And all she did was cry?
Did you know she loved you?
You don't seem to care,
Did you know she needed you?
You were never there.
Do you know you hurt me?
When all you do is lie,
Do you know it broke me?
And all I do is cry.
Do you know I love you?
You don't seem to care,
Do you know I need you?
You are ever there.
I didn't mean to hurt her,
I'm sorry that I lied,
I didn't mean to break her,
I'm sorry that she cried.
I didn't know she loved me,
But I really truly care,
I didn't know she needed me,
But I wish I was there.
If she only knew I love her,
If she only knew I care,
If she only knew I need her,
But life is never fair.
[comments] => 2
[counter] => 199
[topic] => 22
[informant] => Mesano
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 5
[ratings] => 1
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LostLove
)
Did You Know?
Contributed by
Mesano
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:07:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Did you know you hurt her,
When all you did was lie?
Did you know it broke her,
And all she did was cry?
Did you know she loved you?
You don't seem to care,
Did you know she needed you?
You were never there.
Do you know you hurt me?
When all you do is lie,
Do you know it broke me?
And all I do is cry.
Do you know I love you?
You don't seem to care,
Do you know I need you?
You are ever there.
I didn't mean to hurt her,
I'm sorry that I lied,
I didn't mean to break her,
I'm sorry that she cried.
I didn't know she loved me,
But I really truly care,
I didn't know she needed me,
But I wish I was there.
If she only knew I love her,
If she only knew I care,
If she only knew I need her,
But life is never fair.
Copyright ©
Mesano
... [
2004-12-08 15:07:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Did You Know?
(User Rating: 1 ) by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:26:28 AM AEST (User
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Nicely written It flowed smoothly But I think there might have been just a little bit of you in there.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: Did You Know?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dawny on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 10:54:13 AM AEST (User
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I like how you change the points of view here, it is different, but in a great way, I really liked it. I agree, does sound like a little of you in there though
Love Dawny xxx |
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