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Array ( [sid] => 74794 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Friend Forgotten [time] => 2004-12-07 17:20:30 [hometext] => Another friend lost..... [bodytext] => You have no respect left for me
I guess that is what has come to be
I’m sorry you can’t realize what I do
When the way that I feel cannot get through
Angry poems are my means to explain
And my web logs are meant to convey my pain
So with your “special mentions” as you had said
Are only a big deal within your own head
You’re not the only one my poems have been dedicated to
And yet my message still won’t get through
You still cannot see how you caused me torment
Although this may not have been your intent
I’m sorry that you cannot accept me as I am
But no longer can I continue this little sham
I’m sorry as you put it for “bringing you down”
For making me guilty would you like a crown?
And prove that you have out witted me
Even though the truth you refuse to see
I know you tried to help but then why’d you give up
Because I steadily continued to cut
Or was I sinking to deep in depression
Was this just my cry to receive your attention
I guess all my problems were just consumed in my head
I’m sorry I wished and longed to be dead
If you had too then why didn’t you tell?
For I know how that feels oh to well
So what goes around comes around right?
I guess I’ve no longer put up a fight
So live on your life and to you I won’t exist
I’ll confine in someone else when I slit my wrist
I guess I’ll once again be the friend forgotten
Why can’t I learn when this happens so often?
I guess from each other we just faded away
No friendship is meant to stay
I’m just a screw-up the one always wrong
But then again you knew that all along [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 48 [informant] => EternalNight4x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Friend Forgotten

Contributed by EternalNight4x on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 05:20:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You have no respect left for me
I guess that is what has come to be
I’m sorry you can’t realize what I do
When the way that I feel cannot get through
Angry poems are my means to explain
And my web logs are meant to convey my pain
So with your “special mentions” as you had said
Are only a big deal within your own head
You’re not the only one my poems have been dedicated to
And yet my message still won’t get through
You still cannot see how you caused me torment
Although this may not have been your intent
I’m sorry that you cannot accept me as I am
But no longer can I continue this little sham
I’m sorry as you put it for “bringing you down”
For making me guilty would you like a crown?
And prove that you have out witted me
Even though the truth you refuse to see
I know you tried to help but then why’d you give up
Because I steadily continued to cut
Or was I sinking to deep in depression
Was this just my cry to receive your attention
I guess all my problems were just consumed in my head
I’m sorry I wished and longed to be dead
If you had too then why didn’t you tell?
For I know how that feels oh to well
So what goes around comes around right?
I guess I’ve no longer put up a fight
So live on your life and to you I won’t exist
I’ll confine in someone else when I slit my wrist
I guess I’ll once again be the friend forgotten
Why can’t I learn when this happens so often?
I guess from each other we just faded away
No friendship is meant to stay
I’m just a screw-up the one always wrong
But then again you knew that all along




Copyright © EternalNight4x ... [ 2004-12-07 17:20:30]
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Re: Friend Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by DesperateSoul on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 06:43:00 PM AEST
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Excellent Write!!! Feelings put into words perfecrly!!! I know the feelings of which you write so well!!! Keep writing and Keep Posting always!
D.$.


Re: Friend Forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 08:32:01 PM AEST
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powerful. ive had the same kind of friend before. same thing happened. i loved your ending.




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