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[sid] => 74680
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Never Give In
[time] => 2004-12-06 20:55:57
[hometext] => * A rather short poem about abuse. I was thinking of making it longer but thought that would detract from the overall message. Anyway this poem is dedicated to my buddy Jesey *
[bodytext] => Never give into that hate
Stand strong amidst the weakness
Expunge all negative thoughts
Dry those tears (and those cuts)
Live up to and beyond those lies
Lift your head up
And stare depression in the face
Stand up to your pain
Puff your chest with pride
And never let this person
Get his away
Your pain is his gain
Take back those years you lost
No longer hide amongst the shadows
And wipe away the tears that glisten
[comments] => 16
[counter] => 180
[topic] => 65
[informant] => bobotheclown
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => toughstuff
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Never Give In
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:55:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Never give into that hate
Stand strong amidst the weakness
Expunge all negative thoughts
Dry those tears (and those cuts)
Live up to and beyond those lies
Lift your head up
And stare depression in the face
Stand up to your pain
Puff your chest with pride
And never let this person
Get his away
Your pain is his gain
Take back those years you lost
No longer hide amongst the shadows
And wipe away the tears that glisten
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2004-12-06 20:55:57]
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Re: Never Give In
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:59:19 PM AEST
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Wow so much said .amazingly written.
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Re: Never Give In
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by bluebird on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:06:32 PM AEST
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it feels like your actually talking staright to the person.
beautifully written.
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Re: Never Give In
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:11:48 PM AEST
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Good advice, Joel...I think I needed to hear that tonight...thank you
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Never Give In
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:42:00 PM AEST
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fantastic write joel. excellent beginning, "Never give into that hate
Stand strong amidst the weakness" and amazing end, "Take back those years you lost
No longer hide amongst the shadows
And wipe away the tears that glisten" great message and dedication =]
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Re: Never Give In
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by Chanti on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:56:02 PM AEST
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beautiful - its good that this person has someone like you who cares so much about them. dont change
-Chanti |
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Re: Never Give In
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 10:19:13 PM AEST
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| Very uplifting and encouraging. I loved this. |
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Re: Never Give In
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by venkat on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 11:31:30 PM AEST
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aww..very nice message..very much caring..
very good joel... venkat |
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Re: Never Give In
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 11:39:44 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!
+X+Caiti+X+ |
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Re: Never Give In
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:51:21 AM AEST
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Joel, this is such a sad write. Very well put and the message of it all is beautiful. Great poem and thanks for sharing it.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Never Give In
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 05:40:36 AM AEST
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Cool poem, Joel full of unmasked strength and a will to get things done....beautifully written and painted in colors all can relate too...excellent poem mate....
(lol oh dragged back go figure)
Karl |
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Re: Never Give In
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 06:31:39 AM AEST
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| I love the message. Short but sweet. You are very talented! I wish it was that easy though... Good write, thank you for sharing! |
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Re: Never Give In
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:01:54 AM AEST
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brilliantly written, amazing poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Never Give In
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:17:59 AM AEST
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sound advice nicely done
Michelle |
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Re: Never Give In
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by Deathly_Rose on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:05:18 PM AEST
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Wow...
Joel this was a very very good poem... It may be short, but it gets the point acorss very clearly... you need to stand up to what/who's hurting you, if you dont, it may never stop
keep up the great work!
*hugs*
*~Alicia~* |
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Re: Never Give In
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:47:55 PM AEST
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Wonderful write but it's a lot easier said than done.
Scott |
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Re: Never Give In
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by sride686 on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 12:03:54 PM AEST
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| I like the poeam it is strong. I'm in the army and their are lots of people here that need to read this. most are good guys but they need to man up sometimes....thanks for writing it I enjoyed it.....Steve |
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