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Array ( [sid] => 74581 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The great flight [time] => 2004-12-06 02:32:54 [hometext] => dedicated to Carmen, my friend, she died recently [bodytext] => Cuando el sol muere,
(When the sun dies,)
Cuando el rio deja de fluir,
(and the river stops its flow,)
y tu corazón dejó de latir,
(and your heart stops its beats,)
El dolor murió para tí
(The pain died for you)

Cual heróica victoria contra la entropía,
(Like an heroic victory against the entropy,)
asi tu vida transcurrió,
( thus your life passed,)
deseando en lo profundo de tu alma,
(wishing in the deepest of your soul,)
la muerte del dolor y la agonía
( the death of pain and agony,)

Si pudiéramos ser aves y volar a lo más alto,
(If we could be birds and fly higher,)
de esta batalla perdida escapariamos,
(of this lost battle we would scape, )
Deseando por solo un momento,
(Wishing only for a while, )
libertad del temor y la aflicción
(freedom of the fear and affliction,)

Viajeros exhaustos en la infinita travesía por el tiempo,
( Exhausted travellers in the infinite passage across the time)
Cansados de las palabras de profetas y visionarios,
(Tired of the words of prophets and visionaries)
Soñamos con las estrellas y algún día tocarlas
( We dreamed about stars and someday touch them)

Así es amiga mía como tú emprendiste el vuelo,
( thus it is my friend, as you undertook your flight)
Cual gaviota que se pierde en la inmensidad del océano,
( As gull that loses itself in the immensity of the ocean)
Tu volaste hacia las estrellas
(You flew towards stars)

Y no dudo de que algún día yo haga lo mismo
( And I do not doubt that i will do the same someday) [comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 55 [informant] => theDeathRaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

The great flight

Contributed by theDeathRaven on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:32:54 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Cuando el sol muere,
(When the sun dies,)
Cuando el rio deja de fluir,
(and the river stops its flow,)
y tu corazón dejó de latir,
(and your heart stops its beats,)
El dolor murió para tí
(The pain died for you)

Cual heróica victoria contra la entropía,
(Like an heroic victory against the entropy,)
asi tu vida transcurrió,
( thus your life passed,)
deseando en lo profundo de tu alma,
(wishing in the deepest of your soul,)
la muerte del dolor y la agonía
( the death of pain and agony,)

Si pudiéramos ser aves y volar a lo más alto,
(If we could be birds and fly higher,)
de esta batalla perdida escapariamos,
(of this lost battle we would scape, )
Deseando por solo un momento,
(Wishing only for a while, )
libertad del temor y la aflicción
(freedom of the fear and affliction,)

Viajeros exhaustos en la infinita travesía por el tiempo,
( Exhausted travellers in the infinite passage across the time)
Cansados de las palabras de profetas y visionarios,
(Tired of the words of prophets and visionaries)
Soñamos con las estrellas y algún día tocarlas
( We dreamed about stars and someday touch them)

Así es amiga mía como tú emprendiste el vuelo,
( thus it is my friend, as you undertook your flight)
Cual gaviota que se pierde en la inmensidad del océano,
( As gull that loses itself in the immensity of the ocean)
Tu volaste hacia las estrellas
(You flew towards stars)

Y no dudo de que algún día yo haga lo mismo
( And I do not doubt that i will do the same someday)

Copyright Â© theDeathRaven ... [ 2004-12-06 02:32:54]
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Re: The great flight (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:43:00 AM AEST
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An awesome masterpeice and dedication.
So moving.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy

Re: The great flight (User Rating: 1 )
by BethB88 on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:44:17 AM AEST
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i'm learning spanish and i adore the language and i adore this poem! the spanish language is beautiful and your poem lives up to its beauty. i love the imagery. wow, i'm stunned :)

Re: The great flight (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:42:16 AM AEST
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This is a heartwarming dedication to a friend.

It is beautiful and touches deeply inside.

Kie

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