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[title] => The Sister & Mother I Hate
[time] => 2004-12-05 11:23:06
[hometext] => one is dead & the other might as well be...
[bodytext] => I have a sister who I hate with a passion,
I know between siblings that shouldn’t happen,
But my Mother looked after her for 5 years,
She was around to wipe her falling tears.
But she didn’t do the same for me,
That’s not how mothers are meant to be,
Loving one child more than the rest,
She should love them all give them her best.
My younger sister had more love then I did,
It was like I was the unwanted kid,
What did Rebecca have that I did not?
Why did you leave me alone in my cot?
I needed love & attention too,
I was a baby I needed looking after by you!!
But you probably hated me so I got nothing,
Apart from all of your emotional pushing & shoving.
I met you a few times oh my sweet sister of mine,
Out of your arse the sun did not shine,
So why did Mother love you more than I?
I’ll bet you were more upset than me when she died?
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The Sister & Mother I Hate
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pixie
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Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:23:06 AM in AEST
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I have a sister who I hate with a passion,
I know between siblings that shouldn’t happen,
But my Mother looked after her for 5 years,
She was around to wipe her falling tears.
But she didn’t do the same for me,
That’s not how mothers are meant to be,
Loving one child more than the rest,
She should love them all give them her best.
My younger sister had more love then I did,
It was like I was the unwanted kid,
What did Rebecca have that I did not?
Why did you leave me alone in my cot?
I needed love & attention too,
I was a baby I needed looking after by you!!
But you probably hated me so I got nothing,
Apart from all of your emotional pushing & shoving.
I met you a few times oh my sweet sister of mine,
Out of your arse the sun did not shine,
So why did Mother love you more than I?
I’ll bet you were more upset than me when she died?
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Re: The Sister & Mother I Hate
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by MMISS on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:40:28 AM AEST
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| oh that's incredibly sad! i hurts me hto hear someone feels this way. but i've felt the same way before. not now though, as iv've come to realize our mothres are not perfect either. great work pixie! |
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Re: The Sister & Mother I Hate
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by emphaticplacebo on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:52:39 AM AEST
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very intense and personal! you shed some light on your family life and share it with us, sharing your pain, angst and hatred.. pixie, you have such a talent and you utilise it so well, one could only wish you further successes and healing of old wounds
dan xx |
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Re: The Sister & Mother I Hate
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:54:05 AM AEST
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| I am trully gomen you feel that way, Pixie, but Muzthers that have more than one kid probably don't love one kid more, just longer or shorter. I am treated that way, only it is with my father. (yeay! I did it in english!) my brother is Autistic and needs more attention than myself, but I still feel abandoned. It comes with the sibling. |
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Re: The Sister & Mother I Hate
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:56:25 AM AEST
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| a very clear way of expressing feeling, it was full of anger and the last line left a chill down my spine. |
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Re: The Sister & Mother I Hate
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by AliB on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 12:34:14 PM AEST
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Oh pixie,
A very sad an emotional write here, I am the black sheep of my family, my parents aren't that bothered about me and I have a sister and a brother I've not spoken to for over 10 years, another sister that I hardly ever see. But, I've come to the conclusion that I do not need negative people in my life, so they've done me a favour really, think positive, don't dwell on the past, look forward, you have an excellent future ahead of you, keep writing your poetry and carry on being you, you'll be just fine!!
Ali xx |
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Re: The Sister & Mother I Hate
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by EternalNight4x on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 01:12:09 PM AEST
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| well expressed and emotional write...I am also the least favorite out of my sisters..at leats to my mother..well excellent write keep it up |
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Re: The Sister & Mother I Hate
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by Renstar on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:19:57 PM AEST
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| very sad pix, i know how it is though i moved out of home when i was 16 and became independant never went back to this day because my mother didnt understand me or try to cos she didnt care all she cared about was my sisters and brother i was always left feeling ,what did i do wrong?i remeber running away once to see if she cared and i snuck back home and looked through my window into my house only to see them all laughing and having dinner as if i never existed at all, so i knew it was time to go...but thats enough of me....loved ur work like always u truly are talented:) |
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by tifrob on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 10:34:34 PM AEST
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You express your thoughts and feelings superbly. The reader hurts for you. Good work.
J~ |
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Re: The Sister & Mother I Hate
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by venkat on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:34:38 PM AEST
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"Out of your arse the sun did not shine,
So why did Mother love you more than I?"..
very sad..though...that line makes me
smile..;love hugs :-)venkat
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Re: The Sister & Mother I Hate
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by Jenn2004 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:20:31 PM AEST
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| Dont feel bad pixie, i can relate to this totally. My mom loves my brother more than me. She hasnt been like that all our life but now she has. Also she loves my step sister better than me too, she taught her how to do so many things like how to cook and they always went shopping together. We never did have the mother/daughter relationship. We use to fight alot when i was a teenager and i thought it was a teenage thing, but now we fight even worse and i know now its not a teenage thing. It got so worse lately, that i stood up in her faced and cussed her out and told her that she didnt raise me. I cant help but hate her, but i know i will regret it one day. Im trying to show respect for her, and i dont want to break one of the ten commandments either, so i guess thats why i dont let it get to me anymore. Ill be nice to her but it will never be the same again ever. Im sorry you had to go through that, i just wanted to let you know that you are not alone either. Love Jenn |
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