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Array ( [sid] => 74451 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => An Angel Fell [time] => 2004-12-04 23:27:56 [hometext] => not much to say about this poem read it if you want this is not very good so i do not mind if you do no comment [bodytext] => I have seen an Angel tonight

She was the most beautiful sight I have ever seen

No sunset or sunrise could ever compare to her

She had this long red hair that gave off glow with any light

Her smile drove me insane for a while and brought me back

And her eyes still have me trapped and I do not want to escape

But she lets me go with the tears that ran down her face

She wore a dark gown that was a shade of blood red

And behind her were these long black angel like wings

That I swear to you can envelope the earth and every one in it

She was bleeding from her wrist none stop and that scared me

So I went to her and bound her wounds and she thanked me

She told me that you she had to cut her self to fall and be with me

She has been following me for sometimes now and I was just

So amazed that she had even noticed me she is so perfect

I am humbled by her and her magnificence

Then I asked her why and asked her name

It was Danielle I name that I so love

I hid her wings and took her home with me

And on the way she stated to cry

I asked her why she was crying and she said

That she was just happy to be with me

So I dressed her in my arms and she fell asleep
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An Angel Fell

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:27:56 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I have seen an Angel tonight

She was the most beautiful sight I have ever seen

No sunset or sunrise could ever compare to her

She had this long red hair that gave off glow with any light

Her smile drove me insane for a while and brought me back

And her eyes still have me trapped and I do not want to escape

But she lets me go with the tears that ran down her face

She wore a dark gown that was a shade of blood red

And behind her were these long black angel like wings

That I swear to you can envelope the earth and every one in it

She was bleeding from her wrist none stop and that scared me

So I went to her and bound her wounds and she thanked me

She told me that you she had to cut her self to fall and be with me

She has been following me for sometimes now and I was just

So amazed that she had even noticed me she is so perfect

I am humbled by her and her magnificence

Then I asked her why and asked her name

It was Danielle I name that I so love

I hid her wings and took her home with me

And on the way she stated to cry

I asked her why she was crying and she said

That she was just happy to be with me

So I dressed her in my arms and she fell asleep




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Re: An Angel Fell (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:41:27 PM AEST
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Hey now,
You know this is good.
It's tender, beautifull, caring and a masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: An Angel Fell (User Rating: 1 )
by LittleMANof04 on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:45:53 PM AEST
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well, it's certainly not bad. It's only bad if you think it is or someone much smarter than me says so. Great attention to details. i loved the description.


Re: An Angel Fell (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:47:39 PM AEST
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Really beautiful poem, very visual and sad..yet with an awesome ending...this poem rocked...keep the words flowing...they are so mezmerising.


Re: An Angel Fell (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:47:54 PM AEST
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i seem to like all the poems you dont like. ironic eh?


Re: An Angel Fell (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:24:08 AM AEST
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John DUDE what are you on this is a great poem!
When i read it a few days ago it was good,
But now you have added the details its amazing!
u shouldnt be so hard on ur skills as a writer....

Take care babes

Love
Stace xx


Re: An Angel Fell (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:59:48 AM AEST
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Bravo!!! this is such a fab write, very beautifully writen by a real poet.

Hugs,
Jane x


Re: An Angel Fell (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 07:37:11 AM AEST
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you wrtie the most beautiful poems I have ever read this is lovely,

pixie xx


Re: An Angel Fell (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 08:54:40 AM AEST
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Quite exquisite what..this piece...but I hav eto ask...ha ha ha does it hurt....when you fall to earth... a question for the angel of course...ha h aha


Re: An Angel Fell (User Rating: 1 )
by Luka on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:15:57 PM AEST
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nice, i dont know why you dont liek this poem that one line really pulls the reader in "She told me that you she had to cut her self to fall and be with me" try adding some rythem, or ryhming, i dont think it flowed right, but thats just my opnion, and im just a dip***** 17 yearold kid....lol




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