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Array ( [sid] => 74228 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Marie [time] => 2004-12-03 04:50:57 [hometext] => Jane [bodytext] => At just twenty three
where were we?

All smiles in class
how quick the smile does pass.

You use to make us laugh
now we walk down the path

behind your coffin, so light
you tried with all your might.

We missed the tell tale signs
the cuts behind the blinds

the weight you quickly lost
a young life it cost

Fair hair and caring eyes
how were we to know this was our last goodbyes?

Why didnt you say?
We could have helped you stay!

He hurt you deep
that is why you now sleep

away from hurt and pain
allowed to be free again

Grow your wings and fly high
look down upon us from the sky

We will remember you....

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 39 [informant] => sian [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Marie

Contributed by sian on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:50:57 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

At just twenty three
where were we?

All smiles in class
how quick the smile does pass.

You use to make us laugh
now we walk down the path

behind your coffin, so light
you tried with all your might.

We missed the tell tale signs
the cuts behind the blinds

the weight you quickly lost
a young life it cost

Fair hair and caring eyes
how were we to know this was our last goodbyes?

Why didnt you say?
We could have helped you stay!

He hurt you deep
that is why you now sleep

away from hurt and pain
allowed to be free again

Grow your wings and fly high
look down upon us from the sky

We will remember you....

Copyright © sian ... [ 2004-12-03 04:50:57]
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Re: Marie (User Rating: 1 )
by musicisluv7 on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 05:25:02 AM AEST
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very well written poem. its sad how we never realise b4 its 2 late, im sorry.dnt blame urself.
much luv

Re: Marie (User Rating: 1 )
by skraggs on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:45:17 AM AEST
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that is for reals dude.. that is felt.... i know about loss as well... i feel ya

Re: Marie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:03:27 PM AEST
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Heartbreaking write.

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