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Array ( [sid] => 74141 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cuts of Exstacy [time] => 2004-12-02 15:59:51 [hometext] => This is how I was feeling one day. Sorry if my spelling is ****** [bodytext] => Rememebr those promises you always had me make,
I made them all and it was all a big mistake.
Once again I broke them with just a single cut,
You got mad and yelled and called me a ****.
You took away my smile and gave me back a frown,
Who knew you'd be the one to smile as I drowned.
I've cried to many times this I say is true
Everynight I cut myself and think of nothing but you.
I watch the blood start to flow a nice crimson red,
Wishing the pain would be much greater soon off I'll be dead.
I've written several letters I hide under my bed,
That you were the cause of my pain and the reason I am dead.
I can't take anymore of this I am tired of all the lies,
You were promised to make me smile but all I did was cry.
I hide my cuts and scars like it's nothing new,
I go on about my day like I alwyas do.
I'd rather kill mylsef if that's so hard to believe,
Just to stop the pain and stress I got when I hadd to watch you leave.
I wish you would just tell me straight,
The consequences of my fate.
No one will shed a tear
There's no point I'll be gone and you'll be here.
Just take this bloody knife and put it in a place to hide,
Always remeber that I may have killed myself now but you killed me first inside




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Cuts of Exstacy

Contributed by lovingkk05 on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:59:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Rememebr those promises you always had me make,
I made them all and it was all a big mistake.
Once again I broke them with just a single cut,
You got mad and yelled and called me a ****.
You took away my smile and gave me back a frown,
Who knew you'd be the one to smile as I drowned.
I've cried to many times this I say is true
Everynight I cut myself and think of nothing but you.
I watch the blood start to flow a nice crimson red,
Wishing the pain would be much greater soon off I'll be dead.
I've written several letters I hide under my bed,
That you were the cause of my pain and the reason I am dead.
I can't take anymore of this I am tired of all the lies,
You were promised to make me smile but all I did was cry.
I hide my cuts and scars like it's nothing new,
I go on about my day like I alwyas do.
I'd rather kill mylsef if that's so hard to believe,
Just to stop the pain and stress I got when I hadd to watch you leave.
I wish you would just tell me straight,
The consequences of my fate.
No one will shed a tear
There's no point I'll be gone and you'll be here.
Just take this bloody knife and put it in a place to hide,
Always remeber that I may have killed myself now but you killed me first inside








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Re: Cuts of Exstacy (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:06:42 PM AEST
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well epressed and excllent write..I could feel your pain...I liekd the last line "Always remeber that I may have killed myself now but you killed me first inside" excellent job keep it up


Re: Cuts of Exstacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:09:02 PM AEST
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really good poem... and sad... i hope one day u will be happier... hope to see more from u soon

~!*!~Jishes~!*!~


Re: Cuts of Exstacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:13:15 PM AEST
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Lovibkk05
You write prettry good keep it up.
No man is worth hurting yourself over.
Love is gentel
Love is kind
You must love yourself first
before you can really love another person.
Keep writing girl and don't worry about your spelling it will improve over time.
Sinned


Re: Cuts of Exstacy (User Rating: 1 )
by kisser89 on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:13:19 PM AEST
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really good, i know exactly how u were feeling, hope it gets better and if u need to talk im here


Re: Cuts of Exstacy (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:27:44 PM AEST
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I really liked that i have felt like that before different reasons but its all kinda the same if you wanna talk PM me :)
Love
vampyre


Re: Cuts of Exstacy (User Rating: 1 )
by LaurenK on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:34:33 PM AEST
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Great way of expressing yourself! Terrific poem. So sorry you are hurting. Keep writing, its a way of healing sometimes and just getting feelings out. Keep up the great work and believe that things get better. The clouds will go away and right before your eyes there will be a bright, beautiful rainbow!


Re: Cuts of Exstacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:41:17 PM AEST
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you may have been killed inside but whats inside might come back to life =]




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