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Want me need me to set them free,
I tell them no, tell them I can’t,
As I know all they want to do is cause harm.

But I feel myself getting weaker as they call,
Temptation lives in me like a fiery ball,
I know that if I do set them free hell will have to be paid,
In a pool of my own blood I’ll have been laid.

Their screeching pierces my ears,
Makes me cry bloody tears,
I can’t keep a hold of my sanity when they are close,
Then they just disappear like a shadowy ghost.

I can see their eyes they are bloodshot & red,
That terrifying image will stay in my head,
For years I will suffer from terrors of the night,
Only the demons can hear my curdled plight.

I curl up trying to hide, hide far away,
Please tell the demons I don’t want to come out & play,
Haunted & scared is how I live my life,
Forever & eternity I sleep clutching my knife.
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Red Eyed Demons

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:26:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

They call out to me they want me,
Want me need me to set them free,
I tell them no, tell them I can’t,
As I know all they want to do is cause harm.

But I feel myself getting weaker as they call,
Temptation lives in me like a fiery ball,
I know that if I do set them free hell will have to be paid,
In a pool of my own blood I’ll have been laid.

Their screeching pierces my ears,
Makes me cry bloody tears,
I can’t keep a hold of my sanity when they are close,
Then they just disappear like a shadowy ghost.

I can see their eyes they are bloodshot & red,
That terrifying image will stay in my head,
For years I will suffer from terrors of the night,
Only the demons can hear my curdled plight.

I curl up trying to hide, hide far away,
Please tell the demons I don’t want to come out & play,
Haunted & scared is how I live my life,
Forever & eternity I sleep clutching my knife.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-12-02 14:26:30]
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Re: Red Eyed Demons (User Rating: 1 )
by MMISS on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:31:03 PM AEST
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real scary thoughts. keep up the good work!

Re: Red Eyed Demons (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:40:24 PM AEST
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Bloody hell i'm glad the doc put me on sleepers!

never sleep again if i read many more writes like this.

Be afraid ... be very afraid!

good work pix.

johnny

Re: Red Eyed Demons (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:46:55 PM AEST
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Wow Pixie this is scary.awsome.

hugs

Re: Red Eyed Demons (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:16:57 PM AEST
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great write

Re: Red Eyed Demons (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:22:49 PM AEST
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x-cellent write my dear, as all of your poetry, I do love the way this one ends off , very dramatic :D!

Jenni xxoo

Re: Red Eyed Demons (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:25:00 PM AEST
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This write is so close to my own personal life. The voices the visions the evil I hear within Great Job.

~~DENNIS~~

Re: Red Eyed Demons (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:07:56 PM AEST
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"I can see their eyes they are bloodshot & red,
That terrifying image will stay in my head ... "

Wow, that sounds like me in the morning, before coffee.

Great write pixie. Try coffee on 'em, it soothes this stark raving beastie ... LOL

Nazmythian ~

Re: Red Eyed Demons (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:36:44 AM AEST
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Wow, very scary pixie my dear,
this made my soul fill with fear.

Great work!
*~givingin~*

Re: Red Eyed Demons (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:12:26 AM AEST
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Pixie, A powerful write.
.....one thing about our fears you know
we are actually the one in control
As much as we hate our bad thoughts to be
Turning them over to our savior can set us free

A great write, I think writing, like you are doing, is a good way to cope.

Willofree

Re: Red Eyed Demons (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 10:38:17 PM AEST
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ha ha
your so sweetly evil
luv this.

The Wind....

Re: Red Eyed Demons (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 07:51:23 AM AEST
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Wonder wat the were smoking??
Ya jus face your demons one at a time. Then one day you'll realize they're gone.
Awesome writing.
luv, huggs, faith,
emy

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