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Array ( [sid] => 74103 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I want you to hit me [time] => 2004-12-02 11:49:49 [hometext] => ~Exactly as it formed in my thoughts: song lyrics, thoughts, a second set of randomly ordered song lyrics, thoughts, numbers... etc...--Punctuation is important throughout.~ [bodytext] => As bright the star of morning gleams/
So Jesus sheddeth.../

I want you to hit me
To bloody my nose
Let my eyes drain of blood
So I can scream out enraged
A monsterous noise
And dissolve into sugary saltwater tears
A wafer washed into a glass
...

...The Angels' song/
Christ the King is Born/

I want you to hit me
To bloody my nose
So I can scream out enraged
A monsterous noise

Did they know one day men would cry/
Cru-u-u-u-ci-fy/

Cru-u-u-u-ci-fy/

Christ the King is Born

...The Angels' song/

I want you to hit me
To bloody my nose
Let my eyes drain of blood

Eight eight
Six six

So I can scream out enraged

Eight eight
Six Six

A monsterous noise
Eight Eight Eight
Six Six Six Six
And dissolve into sugary saltwater tears
A wafer washed into a glass

...

As bright the star of morning gleams/
So Jesus sheddeth glorious beams/
...
Christ the King is Born/
...
So I can scream out enraged
And dissolve into sugary saltwater tears
A wafer washed into a glass

Eight eight
Six six
Eight eight
Six six

Let my eyes drain of blood
And dissolve into sugary saltwater tears

A watermark.
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I want you to hit me

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 11:49:49 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

As bright the star of morning gleams/
So Jesus sheddeth.../

I want you to hit me
To bloody my nose
Let my eyes drain of blood
So I can scream out enraged
A monsterous noise
And dissolve into sugary saltwater tears
A wafer washed into a glass
...

...The Angels' song/
Christ the King is Born/

I want you to hit me
To bloody my nose
So I can scream out enraged
A monsterous noise

Did they know one day men would cry/
Cru-u-u-u-ci-fy/

Cru-u-u-u-ci-fy/

Christ the King is Born

...The Angels' song/

I want you to hit me
To bloody my nose
Let my eyes drain of blood

Eight eight
Six six

So I can scream out enraged

Eight eight
Six Six

A monsterous noise
Eight Eight Eight
Six Six Six Six
And dissolve into sugary saltwater tears
A wafer washed into a glass

...

As bright the star of morning gleams/
So Jesus sheddeth glorious beams/
...
Christ the King is Born/
...
So I can scream out enraged
And dissolve into sugary saltwater tears
A wafer washed into a glass

Eight eight
Six six
Eight eight
Six six

Let my eyes drain of blood
And dissolve into sugary saltwater tears

A watermark.

Copyright © liquidsunshine ... [ 2004-12-02 11:49:49]
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Re: I want you to hit me (User Rating: 1 )
by MMISS on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:18:59 PM AEST
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beautiful! emotional also. makes a person think

Re: I want you to hit me (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 01:16:00 PM AEST
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Your love of God is screamingly obvious here. I know He moved you to write this. It's moving and full.
Stitch

Re: I want you to hit me (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:05:26 PM AEST
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nice scope- you rendered his birth and death here well

Re: I want you to hit me (User Rating: 1 )
by lifefliesby on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:25:12 PM AEST
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umm, k... ?
it Is a wonderfully done poem
I don't the Concepts of the ideas but you describd them very well...
an excellent write in the right state of mind
and remember, I'm always near; if you need ANYTHING...
I love you Chelsea,
Jared

Re: I want you to hit me (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:45:49 PM AEST
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Intense. You never cease to amaze me with your creativity. You show your intense love through an anger voice...and it was indeed effective. It was a poem I had to read more than once to even get a true glimpse of all the emotion I'm sure that you put into it. Amazing, heartfelt. Very enjoyable. Superb....okay, I'm done.
~Carrie~

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