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Array ( [sid] => 73701 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stained [time] => 2004-11-30 00:06:55 [hometext] => Please give me comments [bodytext] => Screaming inside
Must hold it all in
Nobody knows
The life I live
Or why I do
And why I hide
So lonely inside
And when I cry
My crimson tears
Nobody sees
My silent pain
So dark is the day
When all I see is night
Desperate for something
But not knowing what
Hiding from hell
In a prison
So far from home
It’s not safe
But I don’t know
Where to run
Or who to tell
My secret to
Saying nothing
Is hard to do
When my eyes
Say it all
Avert them now
Run from you
I don’t know
who to trust
Nobody knows
Who I am
When I shut everyone out
From my life
That nobody knows exists
Or when I lie
To cover up
The pain I hide
And when my tears
Are oh so blue
Nobody sees that
Even when
I want them to
Sorry for the pain
That I cause you
Sorry for the worry
I see it in your eyes
I pretend I don’t
When I see you
Crying for me
It hurts me
More then you
Could ever know
Because I want
To tell you
But the words
Will never form
Or dare to ever
Be mentioned
the story is sad
but oh so true
The end is due
For a life
That was never lived
The hope is gone
For a soul
That knows not
What its like
To be saved

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 36 [informant] => NobodySpecial [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Stained

Contributed by NobodySpecial on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:06:55 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Screaming inside
Must hold it all in
Nobody knows
The life I live
Or why I do
And why I hide
So lonely inside
And when I cry
My crimson tears
Nobody sees
My silent pain
So dark is the day
When all I see is night
Desperate for something
But not knowing what
Hiding from hell
In a prison
So far from home
It’s not safe
But I don’t know
Where to run
Or who to tell
My secret to
Saying nothing
Is hard to do
When my eyes
Say it all
Avert them now
Run from you
I don’t know
who to trust
Nobody knows
Who I am
When I shut everyone out
From my life
That nobody knows exists
Or when I lie
To cover up
The pain I hide
And when my tears
Are oh so blue
Nobody sees that
Even when
I want them to
Sorry for the pain
That I cause you
Sorry for the worry
I see it in your eyes
I pretend I don’t
When I see you
Crying for me
It hurts me
More then you
Could ever know
Because I want
To tell you
But the words
Will never form
Or dare to ever
Be mentioned
the story is sad
but oh so true
The end is due
For a life
That was never lived
The hope is gone
For a soul
That knows not
What its like
To be saved

Copyright Â© NobodySpecial ... [ 2004-11-30 00:06:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Stained (User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:27:27 AM AEST
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i can personally relate to this.great work.
keep the faith.

Re: Stained (User Rating: 1 )
by DesperateSoul on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:53:26 AM AEST
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This is exceptional!! It touched me inside and was very similarto personal feelingsand issues i have come across in my life! Keep your spirit high and keep writing always!!!!
D.$.~*

Re: Stained (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 11:25:37 PM AEST
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If you ever need an ear, my email is always there. Could be you jst need the right person to show you that you ARE special.

Powerful read.

The Voice

Re: Stained (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 04:54:36 AM AEST
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You --are special ---and you write so nice!
Just hope you are feeling okay as it is March now and am looking forward to reading your poems again

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