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TAKE THEM AWAY
Contributed by
tears_of_blood
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:45:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Stop the memories please make them go away
I dont want them today I dont want them to stay
No more pain no more tears take all the sad faces away
Ever time you look at me its not a look thats true
Every thing I have done has took all your love away
I say Im sorry but you dont believe me away
So take this sh** away make it stop today
I dont know if youll ever look at me the same
I think your love for me is gone far far away
It looks like its not coming back one of these days
Can I take it all away the screams you hear every day
Why are you still here why didnt you go away some ware
And leave this pain behind for some one else to find
As I sit and write this poem of sad soroes
I sit and wonder if that day well ever come
The day that all the pain is gone
The day you can look at me and not be afraid
Im scared that day is going farther away every day.
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Re: TAKE THEM AWAY
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:49:26 PM AEST
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| I think you need to use a spell check before you finish next time. Also, punctuation will make the poem more clear and easier to read so the reader can focus on your message, rather than trying to sort out confusing sentences. I really like your topic, though. |
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Re: TAKE THEM AWAY
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:27:02 PM AEST
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| powerful write. |
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Re: TAKE THEM AWAY
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 11:17:53 AM AEST
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| Powerful. I like the emotinons that some out of this.. I have had feelings like this before but alittle more of different. Good write |
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