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memories trickling down
painting a bloody mosaic
that only takes me deeper
shards of a goodbye kiss
stain my lips
your absence only makes me weaker
so wretchedly blessed with remorse
Falling into bitter resignation
You captured what was once beautiful
and made it lovely
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Bitter Goodbye

Contributed by bonita2689 on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:43:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

my eyes glued to the distance
memories trickling down
painting a bloody mosaic
that only takes me deeper
shards of a goodbye kiss
stain my lips
your absence only makes me weaker
so wretchedly blessed with remorse
Falling into bitter resignation
You captured what was once beautiful
and made it lovely
then left it shattered

Copyright © bonita2689 ... [ 2004-11-29 17:43:38]
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Re: Bitter Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 06:42:15 PM AEST
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memories trickling down
painting a bloody mosaic

thats a great line can't help but feel like one of mine inspired it

this is another great write

Re: Bitter Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:07:58 PM AEST
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Bonita2689, you always comment so beautifully on my works, so I shall return the favor... This, my friend, is an exquisite example of perfection!! Such melancholic splendor, such profound expressions you weave!! Incredible write! One to read over and over again! I can really relate to this one. A wave of sorrow and pain consumed me, and I couldn't help but shed tears... I'm so sorry for your pain. No one deserves to be hurt. I hope you are healing. Much love and blessings!! Magnificent piece!!

FleurdeSang

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