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Help me up before he sees,
If he does he will be fuming,
His rage will then begin blooming.

I will feel his merciless wrath,
If I ever dared to cross his path,
If I look at him he twists my soul,
Throws me in the fire like a lump of coal.

He scares me to my wits end,
All I need is one good friend,
To help me escape his deadly clutches,
Before my sanity he butchers.

He has threatened that if I told,
That I would die a twenty-two year old,
That he will crush & rupture my spine,
Into my skull he would then entwine.

The fear wells up with my bile,
Feels like I have swallowed a glass file,
I try to scream, scream for help,
But upon my body he casts another whelk.

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Save Me From The Nothing

Contributed by pixie on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 11:28:46 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Save me from the nothing please,
Help me up before he sees,
If he does he will be fuming,
His rage will then begin blooming.

I will feel his merciless wrath,
If I ever dared to cross his path,
If I look at him he twists my soul,
Throws me in the fire like a lump of coal.

He scares me to my wits end,
All I need is one good friend,
To help me escape his deadly clutches,
Before my sanity he butchers.

He has threatened that if I told,
That I would die a twenty-two year old,
That he will crush & rupture my spine,
Into my skull he would then entwine.

The fear wells up with my bile,
Feels like I have swallowed a glass file,
I try to scream, scream for help,
But upon my body he casts another whelk.

Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-11-28 11:28:46]
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Re: Save Me From The Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:09:02 PM AEST
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Wowzeers pixie....this was....amazing.

Re: Save Me From The Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:15:57 PM AEST
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this is an amazing poem and you will always have a friend in me

Re: Save Me From The Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:59:02 PM AEST
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I understand that feeling....I do. This is an awsome poem.

Re: Save Me From The Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:38:43 AM AEST
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Wow this is very sad but written well.
No wonder u r angry if this is what u go thru.
p.m. me any time.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: Save Me From The Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:49:34 AM AEST
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Wow, what a depressing but well written peice. I could feel the pain. Good one.

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