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Array ( [sid] => 73420 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => fantasy or fiction no one knows [time] => 2004-11-28 04:07:22 [hometext] => ehhh i alot to do with me but i really dont feel like eplaining it no the world, kinda explains its self...drunk girls and horny guys talking sweet and telling lies, back out and not knowing but you dont remeber a thing so who gives a [bodytext] => fantasy or fiction no one knows
horny guys and drunk hos
I dont know whats wrong
I think it may have something to do with what was in that bong
Is it real? is it here?
wtf is in my underware?
is it ants? are there bees?
Is someones hands ive never seen?
prolly so but i dunno whats real or whats fake anymore
does he like me cuz im sweet?
or thinks i am an easy treat
Do you know me? do you care?
Why do you lie? why do you stare?
laugh at me and point and tease
drop to my knees and beg you please
easy target, drunken whore
"whats the matter you want more?"
Too drunk so say no or utter a word
but even if i did would i even be heard
im sick of it, im sick of life
suical, grabs a knife
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 513 [topic] => 61 [informant] => MaRy_JaNe_420 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
fantasy or fiction no one knows

Contributed by MaRy_JaNe_420 on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 04:07:22 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



fantasy or fiction no one knows
horny guys and drunk hos
I dont know whats wrong
I think it may have something to do with what was in that bong
Is it real? is it here?
wtf is in my underware?
is it ants? are there bees?
Is someones hands ive never seen?
prolly so but i dunno whats real or whats fake anymore
does he like me cuz im sweet?
or thinks i am an easy treat
Do you know me? do you care?
Why do you lie? why do you stare?
laugh at me and point and tease
drop to my knees and beg you please
easy target, drunken whore
"whats the matter you want more?"
Too drunk so say no or utter a word
but even if i did would i even be heard
im sick of it, im sick of life
suical, grabs a knife




Copyright © MaRy_JaNe_420 ... [ 2004-11-28 04:07:22]
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Re: fantasy or fiction no one knows (User Rating: 1 )
by skraggs on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 04:25:25 AM AEST
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drunken, stoned, suicidal antics... cant go wrong there!


Re: fantasy or fiction no one knows (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:54:36 AM AEST
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I loved it. Totally reminded me of my teen years! Good write, very entertaining.




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