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A floating doll.
With stitches for a mouth.

Dark bags under her eyes.
Pale skin,
Wisps of hair
Bloody wrists.
This is not her.

She is just
A floating doll
With stitches for a mouth.

She lays among
The perfect white clouds
Infecting them
Turning perfect white
To blood stained red.

She is just
A floating doll
With stitches for a mouth.

Her voice is anothers
As it shouts for help
Screaming for a sanctuary
But the cries go unheard
The voice dies
Like she one day will.

She is just
A floating doll
With stitches for a mouth.

Her hands are not hers
As they grasp
The perfect
Silver knife
To make
One
Last
Fatal
Cut.
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Stitches For A Mouth

Contributed by Live2Die on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:02:32 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

She is just
A floating doll.
With stitches for a mouth.

Dark bags under her eyes.
Pale skin,
Wisps of hair
Bloody wrists.
This is not her.

She is just
A floating doll
With stitches for a mouth.

She lays among
The perfect white clouds
Infecting them
Turning perfect white
To blood stained red.

She is just
A floating doll
With stitches for a mouth.

Her voice is anothers
As it shouts for help
Screaming for a sanctuary
But the cries go unheard
The voice dies
Like she one day will.

She is just
A floating doll
With stitches for a mouth.

Her hands are not hers
As they grasp
The perfect
Silver knife
To make
One
Last
Fatal
Cut.

Copyright © Live2Die ... [ 2004-11-28 01:02:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Stitches For A Mouth (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:33:19 AM AEST
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very creepy. I liked this poem a bit as well as
the images of the clouds turning red.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Stitches For A Mouth (User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:40:55 AM AEST
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good write the cries go unheard.....................

Re: Stitches For A Mouth (User Rating: 1 )
by Jodwin on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:28:50 AM AEST
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I like the word play in this one, though the cutting oneself isn't just my stuff for a poem...
A good write nevertheless.

Re: Stitches For A Mouth (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:52:23 AM AEST
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Great write. her voice is anothers as it shouts for help... this was my favorite part.

Re: Stitches For A Mouth (User Rating: 1 )
by Strawberry_Stitch on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:57:51 AM AEST
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sounds like me you were describing

I love it. Im obsessed with stitches ( nick name) and death dolls.

Re: Stitches For A Mouth (User Rating: 1 )
by evilcherry312 on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:54:23 AM AEST
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i think most people who write on the "darker side" identify with this, as do i. good job, very moving for me.

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