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But then we were separated, and all I could think about was you. I had to call you, because all of my thoughts were consumed by you. But then my whole world was shaken. I got to know you a little more, for your first impression was completely opposite of who your dark soul really was. As I didn't know, you pulled me farther and farther into your bottomless pit of deception. Then I met you again hopeing that what I thought of you was wrong but still you once more put back on your mask to hide who you really were. Then that very second I have decided to detatch my heart away from yours. But you kept comeing after me and with every imotional blow you threw I got weaker and weaker.
I couldn't fall in love with your broken truths once more. I won't let it happen!! I WON'T! and when i cast your dark self out, my burden was lifted, the burden of loveing you. The burden that I will never have to see you again has finally, come, true. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Kayden [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Love Hate Tragedy

Contributed by Kayden on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 06:15:13 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

When I first waw you my heart was taken. I had to be with you all the time, no matter what it took.
But then we were separated, and all I could think about was you. I had to call you, because all of my thoughts were consumed by you. But then my whole world was shaken. I got to know you a little more, for your first impression was completely opposite of who your dark soul really was. As I didn't know, you pulled me farther and farther into your bottomless pit of deception. Then I met you again hopeing that what I thought of you was wrong but still you once more put back on your mask to hide who you really were. Then that very second I have decided to detatch my heart away from yours. But you kept comeing after me and with every imotional blow you threw I got weaker and weaker.
I couldn't fall in love with your broken truths once more. I won't let it happen!! I WON'T! and when i cast your dark self out, my burden was lifted, the burden of loveing you. The burden that I will never have to see you again has finally, come, true.

Copyright © Kayden ... [ 2004-11-26 18:15:13]
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Re: Love Hate Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 06:19:29 PM AEST
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Great writing.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy

Re: Love Hate Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 06:37:45 PM AEST
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Wow Kayden, this is very good. there are some spelling errors but but that's ok. Awesome use of emotions. Keep writing

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