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Array ( [sid] => 73142 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Graveyard Of My Past Copyright©2004 11/25 [time] => 2004-11-25 17:58:49 [hometext] => For anyone who cares...My love of a lifetime is over...Diana and I are through...she's gone...I'm alone, I'm hurt, I'm lost, I'm trying to cope by writing again. No sympathy comments please, just venting my frustrations. [bodytext] => It’s been too long again
This Graveyard Of My Past
Tragedy in my wake
For love that didn’t last.

I gave all that I had
I thought more give, than take
She drowned me so completely,
I’m hanging on point break.

Not sure what’s left for me
It’s such a waste of time
To find the love you need
Then just be left behind.

To pour out all you have
Then have it torn away
Alone to be forgotten
To die another day.

Now darkness is surrounding
The shadow has been cast
I’m just a bitter memory
My Graveyard Of My Past.

Breathing won’t come easy
And sleep will never last
I’m slipping six feet under
The Graveyard Of My Past. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 22 [informant] => joker17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Graveyard Of My Past Copyright©2004 1125

Contributed by joker17 on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 05:58:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



It’s been too long again
This Graveyard Of My Past
Tragedy in my wake
For love that didn’t last.

I gave all that I had
I thought more give, than take
She drowned me so completely,
I’m hanging on point break.

Not sure what’s left for me
It’s such a waste of time
To find the love you need
Then just be left behind.

To pour out all you have
Then have it torn away
Alone to be forgotten
To die another day.

Now darkness is surrounding
The shadow has been cast
I’m just a bitter memory
My Graveyard Of My Past.

Breathing won’t come easy
And sleep will never last
I’m slipping six feet under
The Graveyard Of My Past.




Copyright © joker17 ... [ 2004-11-25 17:58:49]
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Re: Graveyard Of My Past Copyright©2004 1125 (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:04:16 PM AEST
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Awesome venting.
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emy


Re: Graveyard Of My Past Copyright©2004 1125 (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:46:55 PM AEST
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Awesome write

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Re: Graveyard Of My Past Copyright©2004 1125 (User Rating: 1 )
by SpeedXDemon on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 09:52:10 PM AEST
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I think that depressing events in a person's life sometimes bring out the best in their creativity.


Re: Graveyard Of My Past Copyright©2004 1125 (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 03:54:28 PM AEST
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Hi well written
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Re: Graveyard Of My Past Copyright©2004 1125 (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 02:15:09 PM AEST
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u reely are a talented writer, love the graveyard analogy, excellent write ;) keep it up!

Jenni xxoo




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