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[aid] => mick
[title] => That October Day
[time] => 2004-11-25 17:33:51
[hometext] => this one took a long time to write I hope you all like it
[bodytext] => I have nothing left- Nothing to give... Since I don't have you- Why Should I live... The words you say-Conflict with the beat.... I look at your blue eyes- so warm so sweet I'm Sorry my feelings for you have changed Is what you said.... I feel so alone so lost- I feel like I'm dead... When you told me you liked me- All the glory rose to my heart... Yes, you were right- you tore me apart... I told you I hated you- But deep down In my heart I don't I can't feel your heart- If It just Won't I told you I didn't like you... But what I told you was a lie... I can't tell you how I feel- you made me cry Why does it hurt so much? You Hurt me I want you so bad... But you took my love for granted... Shattered my heart and made me sad... I wish you would know how I feel I wish, you would come back I would make it right- I would make it real I just want to grab you and make you see... Just how much I need you here with me... I still remember that October day- When you left my world, And you took my heart away... I still remember when you kissed my lips- When I pretended to be asleep- My love for you is so strong so deep... You took my hand, and held it tight I wanted it to last- but it ended that night I miss you talking to me- I miss your smile- and all our flirting... You hurt me so much- Now I'm Still hurting.. My heart was broken- By the squeeze of your soft hand... My heart is buried- deep down in the sand... I look at you- across the room My heart is shedding its pedals- On top of love's tomb... When you broke up with me- You Had no explanation- You were the love of my life- I wanted to take you to my destination... You said you were sorry- But how could you? With one last kiss- You left me too... With one last touch- We were through... Now I can't tell you my dreams or my life Since you took my heart away from me, And stabbed it with a knife. Don't you see how much you made me cry? All Because, You said Goodbye [comments] => 3 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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