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Array ( [sid] => 73073 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HIS SCREAMS [time] => 2004-11-24 23:51:44 [hometext] => Please Comment. [bodytext] => His screams break the silent of the night.

His fears have become reality.
His dreams have been broken this night.

His love has been taken by the hands of men.

Never shall he find
Never shall he know
Never shall he be the same again.

Her death has change him from
what he was.
To what he is a man with
No hope
No desire to live.

Sadness, Anger, Blacken Blood
Is his future.

As he holds her lifeless body.

He screams aloud with a violent rage
Pleading for her not to leave
in such a way.

Pleading to god.

Let me go her way.

( Oh dear Lord take my soul spare her life let her live and grow old take me TAKE ME )

But she still lies dead her body
Broken Bleeding
Empty of life.

He weeps
Not understanding

Will not except
Will not face
Will not believe

He will not hold her again
But alas he must

But will he?

As he stands over her lifeless body
His cries go unheard by GOD
Unfelt by men

He dose what he feels he has to do
and dies within.

Bleeding upon the ground where she lies
HE ALSO DIES.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN
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HIS SCREAMS

Contributed by lemmen on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:51:44 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

His screams break the silent of the night.

His fears have become reality.
His dreams have been broken this night.

His love has been taken by the hands of men.

Never shall he find
Never shall he know
Never shall he be the same again.

Her death has change him from
what he was.
To what he is a man with
No hope
No desire to live.

Sadness, Anger, Blacken Blood
Is his future.

As he holds her lifeless body.

He screams aloud with a violent rage
Pleading for her not to leave
in such a way.

Pleading to god.

Let me go her way.

( Oh dear Lord take my soul spare her life let her live and grow old take me TAKE ME )

But she still lies dead her body
Broken Bleeding
Empty of life.

He weeps
Not understanding

Will not except
Will not face
Will not believe

He will not hold her again
But alas he must

But will he?

As he stands over her lifeless body
His cries go unheard by GOD
Unfelt by men

He dose what he feels he has to do
and dies within.

Bleeding upon the ground where she lies
HE ALSO DIES.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

Copyright © lemmen ... [ 2004-11-24 23:51:44]
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Re: HIS SCREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by THORN on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:10:57 AM AEST
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That is excellent, keep it up!

Cheers,
-XRaye

Re: HIS SCREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by Sophie_Taylor on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:46:37 AM AEST
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This is an awesome poem. i know how he must feel with the same sort of thing happening to my older brother. This is a great write and keep up the goodwork, i would really like to publish some of this in my writing. Can you contact me on sophietaylor@dodo.com.au to see whether its ok. I want other people to see the pain and suffering of this poem. Cheers
Luv Sophie

Re: HIS SCREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:33:15 AM AEST
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very sad, but written excellently Dennis *hugs* for you my friend,

pixie xx

Re: HIS SCREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 09:38:13 AM AEST
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very dark stuff!
i don't know what else to say... it was upsetting fr me to read, but i did because it makes me feel like i'm not alone with these feelings...

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