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I fell for your honey brown eyes,
And those lips covered in sin.
I knew I wouldn't be able to resist,
I knew I would eventually give in.

You told me you cared for me,
And wanted us to be together.
So I gave in to your touch,
Even though I should have known better.

I gave you all of me,
Everything just happened so fast.
It was so intimate and amazing,
All I wanted was our night to last.

You called me a day later,
But after that you just dissapeared.
Out of my life and out of town,
Now I had reason to fear.

I now know that I was played,
Taken for one of your sick joy rides.
Three weeks since I've heard from you,
All I remember is your deceitful lies.

Am I really worth anything to you?
I now feel so used and alone.
I hope your happy with your game,
It hurts me more than you'll ever know...


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My Giveaway

Contributed by shattered_heart on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:15:13 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



____________________________________________________________________________________

I fell for your honey brown eyes,
And those lips covered in sin.
I knew I wouldn't be able to resist,
I knew I would eventually give in.

You told me you cared for me,
And wanted us to be together.
So I gave in to your touch,
Even though I should have known better.

I gave you all of me,
Everything just happened so fast.
It was so intimate and amazing,
All I wanted was our night to last.

You called me a day later,
But after that you just dissapeared.
Out of my life and out of town,
Now I had reason to fear.

I now know that I was played,
Taken for one of your sick joy rides.
Three weeks since I've heard from you,
All I remember is your deceitful lies.

Am I really worth anything to you?
I now feel so used and alone.
I hope your happy with your game,
It hurts me more than you'll ever know...






Copyright © shattered_heart ... [ 2004-11-24 20:15:13]
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Re: My Giveaway (User Rating: 1 )
by Niccy on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:18:46 PM AEST
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That was a really good poem. I know exactly how you feel.


Re: My Giveaway (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:34:08 PM AEST
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powerful and emotional. you deserve so much better than him and so much better than what you got. best wishes.


Re: My Giveaway (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:42:25 PM AEST
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Good write....full of emotions....
Jenni


Re: My Giveaway (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 04:23:21 AM AEST
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thats really sad when this happens, just remember hes out of your life now. you dont need a$$holes like him. so good luck with everything hun.

Hugs,
Jane


Re: My Giveaway (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:17:11 PM AEST
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i hate to hurt anyone but sometimes do

i think i know how you feel




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