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Array ( [sid] => 72941 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ENERGIA QUIMERICA [time] => 2004-11-24 01:47:05 [hometext] => ENERGIA QUIMERICA [bodytext] => Orden y Simetria en la naturaleza como tu rostro
electrones uniendo los atomos de tu CUERPO
cada uno en conjución con gravitones que los mantienen en su lugar debido
Creacion prodigiosa obra de trillones de quarks

I just wanna f**k with you
I just wanna feel your p***y on me
You're blowing my mind and drive me mad

Existiremos por siempre
Viajaremos por el sistema Solar
Saturno, Urano, Neptuno, Plutón
Seremos polvo estelar que viajará por el universo

I'm just think about you
My d**k is like a big stick for c*m in your body
We Will be together forever

En el fin del tiempo cuando tus protones y los mios se conviertan en energía
te fundirás conmigo en una copula eterna
nos expandiremos por el infinito,
gracias fuerza nuclear debil

Well, i don´t know about the death
But what the heck
Your body is mine for this little short time

El Universo perecerá
Pero nosotros seremos taquiones
avanzando a la velocidad del infinito
Viajando atrás en el tiempo

'till the time of our first f**k
you are so delicius and we want to stay together
my body and my mind are yours 'till the end of time.

Atravezaremos nuestros cuerpos una vez mas
Y los llenaremos de energia
Poderosos orgasmos provenientes del fin del universo
llenaran nuestros cuerpos [comments] => 5 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 64 [informant] => theDeathRaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => spanish [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

ENERGIA QUIMERICA

Contributed by theDeathRaven on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 01:47:05 AM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Orden y Simetria en la naturaleza como tu rostro
electrones uniendo los atomos de tu CUERPO
cada uno en conjución con gravitones que los mantienen en su lugar debido
Creacion prodigiosa obra de trillones de quarks

I just wanna f**k with you
I just wanna feel your p***y on me
You're blowing my mind and drive me mad

Existiremos por siempre
Viajaremos por el sistema Solar
Saturno, Urano, Neptuno, Plutón
Seremos polvo estelar que viajará por el universo

I'm just think about you
My d**k is like a big stick for c*m in your body
We Will be together forever

En el fin del tiempo cuando tus protones y los mios se conviertan en energía
te fundirás conmigo en una copula eterna
nos expandiremos por el infinito,
gracias fuerza nuclear debil

Well, i don´t know about the death
But what the heck
Your body is mine for this little short time

El Universo perecerá
Pero nosotros seremos taquiones
avanzando a la velocidad del infinito
Viajando atrás en el tiempo

'till the time of our first f**k
you are so delicius and we want to stay together
my body and my mind are yours 'till the end of time.

Atravezaremos nuestros cuerpos una vez mas
Y los llenaremos de energia
Poderosos orgasmos provenientes del fin del universo
llenaran nuestros cuerpos

Copyright Â© theDeathRaven ... [ 2004-11-24 01:47:05]
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Re: ENERGIA QUIMERICA (User Rating: 1 )
by theDeathRaven on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:03:51 AM AEST
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This is a Simply view of the death and the infinity of our universe.
We don´t think about the death of universe, 'cause it will be happen in a very long time. We are not there when this happen.
The love (and sex) is a wonderful medicine against our fears (death, entropy, etc) practice that and be happy for the rest of your life
greetings

Re: ENERGIA QUIMERICA (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:06:38 AM AEST
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do you know why this poem is good? it's because you got the balls to say things that other pepole on here aren't willing to say or admit to. this poem is one of the best contemporary pieces i have seen, what it lacks in class it makes up for with a deep feeling of longing and passion and a drive for this other person. truly a masterpiece my freind, keep it up. oh and don't be surprised if these jack offs on here don't comment on your work, they only read and comment on poetry that is played out or cliched. good stuff here, keep writing.

Re: ENERGIA QUIMERICA (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:29:24 AM AEST
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Deadreckoning has an opinion of himself that some here agree with. His opinion of people on this site, I don't. Your poem may be good - but I'm unable to speak spanish/portuguese/whatever, so I'm unable to give you any interpretation, i'm afraid.

If you write something entirely in English, I might be able to . ..

But keep writing.

Re: ENERGIA QUIMERICA (User Rating: 1 )
by theDeathRaven on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:52:49 AM AEST
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hello neptunes_first, i will post a totally english version of this poem soon, thanks a lot for your comment

Re: ENERGIA QUIMERICA (User Rating: 1 )
by theDeathRaven on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 03:03:59 AM AEST
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Thanks to all for your comments.
and yeah, i will keep writting more...
greetings

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