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Can't seem to fall asleep a nightmare in every way.
One, Two, and Three,
Can't fall asleep.

Cause she always watching me.
She waits for me in my dreams.
Damm I'm scared.

Holden up a candle to watch
It's flickering light.

Voices in my mind waiting for me to hurt
can't tell what's real or even how to feel.

Can't escape the pain of living
every day.
I know I've had no sleep
now for four damm days.

Living is a night mare
vision come one by one.
I'm going to lose it
that day is sure to come.
The day I break down and HURT
everyone.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN
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BREAKDOWN

Contributed by lemmen on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 10:14:26 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

Voices getting louder each and every day.
Can't seem to fall asleep a nightmare in every way.
One, Two, and Three,
Can't fall asleep.

Cause she always watching me.
She waits for me in my dreams.
Damm I'm scared.

Holden up a candle to watch
It's flickering light.

Voices in my mind waiting for me to hurt
can't tell what's real or even how to feel.

Can't escape the pain of living
every day.
I know I've had no sleep
now for four damm days.

Living is a night mare
vision come one by one.
I'm going to lose it
that day is sure to come.
The day I break down and HURT
everyone.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

Copyright © lemmen ... [ 2004-11-22 22:14:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: BREAKDOWN (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:40:02 PM AEST
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i can relate. i feel like killing everyone sometimes and breaking down like that. great poem i love it.

Re: BREAKDOWN (User Rating: 1 )
by shattered_heart on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:25:14 PM AEST
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Understand, sometimes I can't sleep for days apon end because of things. I sometimes just want to just die in my sleep so I don't have to think about the torturing day that comes in the morning. Good write.

- Rachelle

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