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Array ( [sid] => 72567 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a farewell [time] => 2004-11-21 16:39:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Darkness crawling right towards me
Glimpse of shadows in the sea
Guilt for everything inside me
All your guilt in fact was me
You, my angel from the heavens
You, my guide light in the nights
Aren't you frightened of the raven
Ghastly croaking my last rites
Thank you darling that you let me
Touch the sainthood of your eyes
Thank you that you didn't change me
That you loved me as i was
It was you who gave me power
To forget the fear to feel
Since that moment till the very hour
When the tomb my love will seal
Please forgive me that i'll go now
Like the night forgave our sins
And forget the words in our vow
And the light will heal your wings
Darkness crawling right towards me
Glimpse of shadows in the sea
No more guilt or pain inside me
All your guilt will die with me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Eoss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
a farewell

Contributed by Eoss on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:39:15 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Darkness crawling right towards me
Glimpse of shadows in the sea
Guilt for everything inside me
All your guilt in fact was me
You, my angel from the heavens
You, my guide light in the nights
Aren't you frightened of the raven
Ghastly croaking my last rites
Thank you darling that you let me
Touch the sainthood of your eyes
Thank you that you didn't change me
That you loved me as i was
It was you who gave me power
To forget the fear to feel
Since that moment till the very hour
When the tomb my love will seal
Please forgive me that i'll go now
Like the night forgave our sins
And forget the words in our vow
And the light will heal your wings
Darkness crawling right towards me
Glimpse of shadows in the sea
No more guilt or pain inside me
All your guilt will die with me




Copyright © Eoss ... [ 2004-11-21 16:39:15]
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Re: a farewell (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:47:02 PM AEST
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Very beautiful and sad. Wonderful write.

Laurie


Re: a farewell (User Rating: 1 )
by shattered_heart on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 08:58:27 PM AEST
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Very deep and creative. I like your ryming in this one. Good write.




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