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Array ( [sid] => 72479 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What's Wrong With Me? [time] => 2004-11-20 21:35:30 [hometext] => I wrote this the other night. I just expirenced my first real break up and I was a little heart broken. Hope you enoy and hope you can relate. Tell me what you think please. [bodytext] => I still can't understand
Why you broke my heart
You left me weak
And alone in the dark

It's been a while now
But I can still feel your body
Every beat of your heart
I thought you loved me

Even though we've been through some hard times
we always came through
And after these little arguments
I always felt closer to you

I'm sorry for the things
I may have done
I wish you would forgive me
And we can move on

Am I just imagining
All the feelings from you
Because now it seems
You'll never prove you were true

I'm not supposed to continue with these feelings
My heart should be full of hatred
But my heart acts fragile
And it is sacred

When I see your eyes search mine
I want to let you embrase me
But I know you hate me
And with this knowledge I cannot be free

I often wonder
Why you let me feel such pain
I ofter wonder
Why aren't my eyes full of vain

I miss you much
And I can't move on
I need you here
Otherwise I'll never be strong. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 22 [informant] => xXluckie_lynnXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
What's Wrong With Me?

Contributed by xXluckie_lynnXx on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:35:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I still can't understand
Why you broke my heart
You left me weak
And alone in the dark

It's been a while now
But I can still feel your body
Every beat of your heart
I thought you loved me

Even though we've been through some hard times
we always came through
And after these little arguments
I always felt closer to you

I'm sorry for the things
I may have done
I wish you would forgive me
And we can move on

Am I just imagining
All the feelings from you
Because now it seems
You'll never prove you were true

I'm not supposed to continue with these feelings
My heart should be full of hatred
But my heart acts fragile
And it is sacred

When I see your eyes search mine
I want to let you embrase me
But I know you hate me
And with this knowledge I cannot be free

I often wonder
Why you let me feel such pain
I ofter wonder
Why aren't my eyes full of vain

I miss you much
And I can't move on
I need you here
Otherwise I'll never be strong.




Copyright © xXluckie_lynnXx ... [ 2004-11-20 21:35:30]
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Re: What's Wrong With Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:40:11 PM AEST
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breakups are really hard and sometimes harder than the first and the y hurt the most the more you lost and the more you loved

this is a good write and i can relate


Re: What's Wrong With Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by XOashleyreneXO on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 05:38:19 PM AEST
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nothins wrong with you. i keep tellin you...hes just too stupid to see that you are an awesome gurl. keep writin an lettin your feelings out. it helps...you taught me that.
Love you bunches! ashley rene'


Re: What's Wrong With Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 07:43:14 PM AEST
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I know its been a while since i posted on your poems. I read this and thought Cuz this guy was such a jerk! The one you are with now is so much better and he treats you good. There is nothing wrong with you and the boy your with now proves it. He is a keeper!

love~N~stuff
Emmy




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