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Array ( [sid] => 72231 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not together again [time] => 2004-11-19 06:39:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I want to talk to you
for the first and last time
and please listen to what I got to say...
please don't cruse me out anymore
cuase I'm already on the edge
I'm holding on my my pinky
and I don't know why
why can't i let go
let go of life
and you
so I can be alone
together with loneliness again
oh how he was a good friend
I should of never left my solitude alone...
So here I sit
poisoned with you on my mind
and i try not to cry
Cuase you never cry for me
And how I hate
myself for loving you so much
Things would be so much better
if I could only get away... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 48 [informant] => elatednbliss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Not together again

Contributed by elatednbliss on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 06:39:34 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I want to talk to you
for the first and last time
and please listen to what I got to say...
please don't cruse me out anymore
cuase I'm already on the edge
I'm holding on my my pinky
and I don't know why
why can't i let go
let go of life
and you
so I can be alone
together with loneliness again
oh how he was a good friend
I should of never left my solitude alone...
So here I sit
poisoned with you on my mind
and i try not to cry
Cuase you never cry for me
And how I hate
myself for loving you so much
Things would be so much better
if I could only get away...

Copyright © elatednbliss ... [ 2004-11-19 06:39:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Not together again (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:48:57 AM AEST
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Wow! deep and powerful full of emotions.. I can really relate to how you are or were or still are feeling and i know how it is and how it goes. Hang in there.

blessed be
~ :: christina :: ~

Re: Not together again (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 11:48:51 PM AEST
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It's a fairly good poem. It might be more effective if you spelled "cause" right though. Keep writing.
Cheers!

Re: Not together again (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 08:12:08 PM AEST
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Hey, this is incredile writing.
I know the thoughts, feelings-n-emotions.
Hang tuff as joy cometh in the morning.
Please take it easy on yourself.
Take care, huggs,
emy

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