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Array ( [sid] => 7185 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ~* Away From You *~ [time] => 2002-11-21 18:20:00 [hometext] => Please read this... and let me know what you think. I wrote this at a point of my life where the only person i truly believed in... betrayed me... and it cut sooo deep... [bodytext] => I sit there in silence,
Waiting for the end,
Waiting for the shrill sound of olife to cut deep within me,
Into my soul,
Exposing a part of me i never knew existed.
The tranquill surroundings i onced longed for are gone,
And the only sounds i hear are that of the voices within me,
Driving me insine,
As i twist and turn in a laberynth of sectrets, lies and deception,
A place where i dont belong.
My soul is shattering,
And you only laugh at my pain,
You point, like im a freak,
And you watch as I degrade into a world of non existance.
A world I long to be,
Where I am away from you..... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Delusions [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

~* Away From You *~

Contributed by Delusions on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I sit there in silence,
Waiting for the end,
Waiting for the shrill sound of olife to cut deep within me,
Into my soul,
Exposing a part of me i never knew existed.
The tranquill surroundings i onced longed for are gone,
And the only sounds i hear are that of the voices within me,
Driving me insine,
As i twist and turn in a laberynth of sectrets, lies and deception,
A place where i dont belong.
My soul is shattering,
And you only laugh at my pain,
You point, like im a freak,
And you watch as I degrade into a world of non existance.
A world I long to be,
Where I am away from you.....

Copyright Â© Delusions ... [ 2002-11-21 18:20:00]
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Re: ~* Away From You *~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:35:06 PM AEST
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You have described the hurt so well here... a very deep poem..
(It could do with a spell-check, tho'.)
Jenni

Re: ~* Away From You *~ (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:02:00 PM AEST
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Lack of communication is what
i see here, I'm sorry but it's written
all over this poem, Lack of communication
will destroy a relationship fast. Thanks for
sharing this one i really enjoyed it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: ~* Away From You *~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 01:57:54 AM AEST
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been there...done that...but you have a great version of the hurt that goes with it ...good writing!

Re: ~* Away From You *~ (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:34:36 AM AEST
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I don't really understand the comment about lack of communication.

Sometimes these feelings just come from being in the wrong relationship. I've written many a poem about feeling just this way - almost total destruction just from being in love - and we can never choose "the one" it just happens to us when we least expect it, and then we have to cope somehow when it doesn't work out. I truly relate to this poem in a big way - excellent write... Jan

Re: ~* Away From You *~ (User Rating: 1 )
by unforgiven on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:58:49 AM AEST
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thank you for putting into words the emotions i could not express. everytime i read this poem i start to cry, a great testament to the amount of emotion and feelings conveyed in this poem...thank you...mwa

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